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Avon's Drabbles  by Avon 79 Review(s)
Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 29 on 4/21/2006
This was just lovely and very atmospheric.

Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 4/21/2006
Wow. Very, very nice.

Author Reply: Thank you. This is one of my earlies drables and I've never been sure of it.

Nancy BrookeReviewed Chapter: 12 on 4/24/2005
Excellent. Even the brevity of the form communicates how little power of abstract thought Aragorn has left in this journey; he's become just Gollum's capture with limited articulated feelings. You really capture the whole experience - every sense and impression.

mirthorReviewed Chapter: 30 on 4/13/2005
This must be a blessing and a burden for Faramir to look at Elboron everyday & see the person he loved best - to be reminded of the grief, yet still have a bit of him to hold onto.

Author Reply: Thanks for the review. Yes, I think it is mixed blessing - and of course so hard to not try to make into your missing Boromir.

NessimeReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/19/2005
Avon, how I missed this one before I don't know, but it is beautiful. This is one of my favorite moments in Rohan's history - along with the renewal of the Oath by Aragorn and Éomer.

meckinockReviewed Chapter: 29 on 1/23/2005
I really enjoyed this. Although I chose to portray Halbarad as a contemporary of Aragorn's, it is delightful to see what he's like as a member of the older generation. The affection and loyalty are still there. And the amusement.

Author Reply: It's funny - I hadn't even thought of the age thing until someone else commented on it. My Halbarad just *is* older than Aragorn. I see him as being midway between Arathorn (who was an old father) and Aragorn. If I ever write him again (after I finish the other version of this story) I might have to try playing with his age.

Cheers,

Avon

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 28 on 1/11/2005
Very clever - and just goes to show that there is more to Faramir than the cerebral! I wonder whether the distraction will still work in fifty years?

Author Reply: Oh I do hope so! After all, there is some Numenor blood there. ;-)

Reviewed Chapter: 28 on 1/10/2005
Ha! Love it!

Author Reply: Thanks.

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 28 on 1/10/2005
This made me smile - what a lovely way to start work on a rainy monday morning! Thank you


Author Reply: Thanks - and, hey, send some of that rain over here: we still need it.

Avon
Sydney, Australia

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 28 on 1/9/2005
My goodness - what did she do to distract him?? Whatever it was, he didn't seem to mind too much!

I know exactly how Faramir feels - I *hate* it when someone disturbs me when I'm reading (though my husband has never tried Éowyn's tactic!)

Jay

Author Reply: *grin* Much more fun to let everyone decide for themselves. My feeling was possibly licking the back of his neck - though if anyone tried that on me I'd deck them, but not everyone has my aversion to being touched on the neck.

I also *hate* being disturbed when reading.

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