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| Avon's Drabbles by Avon | 79 Review(s) |
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| Unheard Chime | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/3/2004 |
| That is a wonderful description of how the proud Wood-elves must have felt at their failure. Author Reply: Thanks. I'm not convinced I got it - but that's what I wanted. Avon | |
| Unheard Chime | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/3/2004 |
| "The edge of my utter aloneness..." That is such a wonderful line... Author Reply: Um... *blush* and thank you ;-) Avon | |
| Unheard Chime | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/3/2004 |
| This is wonderful... very poignant. I like his transition from childhood wonder to jarring reality. Very well written... congratulations. Author Reply: Thank you! Real Frodo-experts have said it is bit more movie-Frodo than book-Frodo and they could be right - but I still think he was in that extended childhood of the well-to-do until all this happened. Avon | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/12/2003 |
| What a 'chilling' analogy, between the cold air and the Ring's siren call. Very nice! Author Reply: Thank you! Avon | |
| Coriel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/9/2003 |
| Ooo, well done! I think I have some inkling of how Legolas feels here, at least on a general level. I've worn glasses since the third grade; now I'm trying to work my way out of them without those awful lasers, and now I've endured an entire year with suddenly insufferably short vision, though it is improving *oh-so-slowly*. It is irksome to suddenly have your powers of perception trammelled, especially, I would imagine, for an Elf. ;) Author Reply: Thanks, Coriel. I'm very interested in how you are trying to work your way out of glasses as I've had to have them for the last year when I became short-sighted and boy I miss good vision! Avon | |
| Hiro-tyre | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/3/2003 |
| Wow! These are very profound! Author Reply: Thank you for the feedback. Avon | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/2/2003 |
| Well done. I admit I shy away from writing Legolas, but I think you have captured him in a moment in time, here. Author Reply: I love Legolas - but I also find him a bit hard to write, generally. I think I worry too much what everyone will think of my interpretation of him. With 100 words I guess I didn't have time to panic ;-) | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/2/2003 |
| Nicely done. The drabble and title go together hand-in-glove. This could very well be the stream of Frodo's thoughts as he steps forward. Lovely imagery, how well you evoke Shire life in just a few words! Author Reply: *grin* I overwrote this, getting all descriptive, and had a terrible time getting it short enough ;-) Thanks for the feedback. Avon | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/2/2003 |
| "Do mortals live always in this silence? I shiver and wonder no longer at the dark grimness of our Men." Oooh. What a wonderful insight. Author Reply: Thanks! I actually rather like caves so I really tried to get into Legolas's head - and he came up with that thought ;-) | |