| marinus stiria by bryn | 59 Review(s) |
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| Estel_Mi_Olor | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/26/2004 |
| I'm sorry I haven't reviewed the other chapters!!! I just got so caught up in the story... and now Legolas has gone. It really isn't fair that the Valar torture him so. And poor Gimli. So shunned. At least he had the sense to accompany the Elf. Legolas wouldn't have lasted a week in his condition. Bitaliel amuses me. She's so funny. I don't recall, how exactly did Halbarad die? And nice tying that flashback in with Cantrip. Keep writing! Cheers! |
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| Estel_Mi_Olor | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 1/25/2004 |
| OMG, why did Mortsdil have to find Tegiron? Why? Why did he have to be the Spawn of Hell? Ye Gods, Legolas is getting himself into an awful mess. A huge, huge mess, that makes even Morgoth quake in fear. *Am hiding under my bed* But I must continue reading!!! Cheers! |
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| Estel_Mi_Olor | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/25/2004 |
| Thank you Legolas!!! You are the savior of Gondor and the world! Arwen is your Princess! Together you shall save Aragorn from his folly!!! (This is a chant, by the way,) I thought Legolas would be overtaken by the jewel. Thank you. And thank you for letting them realize what it was. Ah, I cannot wait to see what will happen nxt! Cheers! |
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| Estel_Mi_Olor | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/25/2004 |
| OMG the woman gounged out her own eyes? *Deep breath* How horrible!!! Ride Legolas, ride!!! You must save your foolish king from his own folly. Ye Gods, what next? |
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| Estel_Mi_Olor | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/25/2004 |
| Ai Aragorn!!! What is he doing? Stop him!!! Gees, just because Legolas is coming to warn him, that fool decides to ignore his wife's warning and look at the Silmaril. Ai Aragorn!!! Can't write, must read!!! |
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| Estel_Mi_Olor | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/25/2004 |
| Wow that was great. But I thought Morgoth...No you're right. He was exiled. Wow. This is getting huge. The Valar should be aware of this. And that man, Morts somebody. He is the Spawn of Hell. Meanwhile Aragorn and Arwen are listening to a woman ranting about hot pies? *Good grief* But Bitaliel? Wow that woman is raving. That scares me. I'm terrified. Please don't hurt Legolas. Cheers. |
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| Es | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/25/2004 |
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| Estel_Mi_Olor | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/25/2004 |
| YAY Pirates!!! I love pirates, they always spice up a story. And these corsairs are up to something if secrecy is so important to them. Hmm...Interesting. I must ask you, how do you write a story like this? I mean, do you plan a ton of stuff beforehand or it on the spot? I tried starting a story, but it was so boring I put myself to sleep. Good grief. Well cheers and keep writing! |
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| Estel_Mi_Olor | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/25/2004 |
| Argh sorry about that previous blank review. But I knew it was a Silmaril!!! That woman is crazy. Totally crazy. Poor Legolas...I foresee angst. And what's this story that you can't write angst? I'm torn, crying, etc. This is very angsty. Too much in fact. Argh, I must keep reading!! |
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| Es | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/25/2004 |
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