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Following the Other Wizard: journey into healing  by jodancingtree 26 Review(s)
Gentle HobbitReviewed Chapter: 35 on 3/14/2004
Oh dear. The ending, in fact, the entire last chapter, left me in tears. You have such a power and clarity with words which I have both enjoyed and appreciated throughout this whole story.

I feel like I *learned* from this story, and that is always a lovely gift.

Thank you, Jodancingtree.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 35 on 3/14/2004
I hope you're as proud of yourself for this story, as we are of you. You are truly a master storyteller, and I loved this from beginning to end.

Rose SaredReviewed Chapter: 35 on 3/14/2004
Thank you for this wonderful story in its entirety, just finished it this w/e and it has been a true pleasure.
Looking forward to reading more of your wonderful imagination.
Rose

CuthalionReviewed Chapter: 35 on 3/14/2004
Ah Jo... when I started to copy the revised version into my computer, nobody had left a review yet and now, that I'm finished, there are already two of them! Well... what shall I say? Again... this chapter was the first in fan fiction ever that urged me to leave the computer and the room because I burst into tears and couldn't see properly any more (as I told you before, my husband was a little bit concerned...*gg*). Amazing work, and a peaceful end, sad and beautiful and oh so moving at the same time. I love every word of it. Lots of work this autumn, I daresay... Gracias, amiga de mi corazon!

Breon BriarwoodReviewed Chapter: 35 on 3/14/2004
*sniff!* *grabs the hankie* oh... ;_; Seriously, I'm in tears. This was absolutely beautiful. Excellent work! I have enjoyed reading this tremendously.
You have such an incredible talent - I'm envious. Still, as they say, all good things must come to an end, and such an end it was! *bows on bended knee*

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 35 on 3/14/2004
O Jo. You don't know what you've done to me. Tears turning to laughter turning to wonder turning to a breathless feeling. What a lovely story this is, some of your best writing, I think.

I'm honoured that you liked the name "Daisy" for Fro's wife. It is so lovely to run across a bit of familiarity in a piece so beautifully written.

It is a bit eerie, though, as well. You'll see, when Marigold's challenge number three is posted, that you and I were thinking very much along the same lines recently. I had to shiver--I wrote and sent my story to her over a week ago, and just read this chapter of yours tonight, and yet we have used many of the same turns of phrase and ideas! How odd, as if we had both tuned into the same broadcast at the same time...

Ah, well. Such things make life interesting.

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