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| Just to be With You by Pervinca | 26 Review(s) |
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| PIppinfan1988 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/27/2004 |
| Orlando Burrows! ROFL...I seriously thought you were making reference to someone else! I'll have to look that up. This is good--I'll be back for more! I've been naughty and sitting on the computer all day...I'm on dial up... Take care. Pippinfan Author Reply: I share your dial-up pain. Thanks for reading this, though it is a pity that you've given up on yours. Will be looking forward to your feedback :) | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/25/2004 |
| I am so glad that Fatty made it into your story too. He's getting his share of the fictions this month at least. I like him and I do think he gets over-looked. I am also glad that he plans to explain things to Estella for poor Merry. This is a very enjoyable story! Author Reply: Ah, Master Fredegar has always been a favourite of mine (I always like the small, seemingly "insignificant" characters like Fatty, Beregond and Quickbeam). And you're right, he does get over-looked a lot! You should be pleased to know that he'll have a large role in some of the up-coming chapters. Thanks so much for reading, I always appreciate your feedback! | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 2/25/2004 |
| I wanted to applaud too! Very lovely chapter! clap clap clap clap clap......... | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/20/2004 |
| Ok, so it just took Merry a bit longer to get caught in his bedroom with a lass. LOL You surprised me as I thought it was coming earlier and when it didn't I put it out of my mind! Nice work! I only hope that someone with half a brain finds them instead of someone who makes it a very big deal..... Author Reply: I always thought of Merry having more self-control than his Tookish cousin. After all, Pippin has three older sisters! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Trying to work my way through a bit of a block at the moment. I know where I want to go, but I'm having trouble getting there! I'm sure you know how annoying that can be! | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/20/2004 |
| Love Pip in the library and I had a minute there when I feared that Merry might be caught innocent though it was with Estella in his room! Wonder if Pippin not being allowed to smoke has led to his finding other things to do? LOL | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/20/2004 |
| I'm hooked and am off to read more. Good beginning! | |