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Hidden Agenda  by sheraiah 14 Review(s)
KittyReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/23/2005
Can't wait to see Thranduils reaction to all this when he once again gets bettter, no one hurts his son and goes unpunished!!

Hope Legolas will get better soon (Don't really believe that you would kill him off or at least i hope you dont!!!

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/23/2005
I suppose it's a good thing that both Thranduil and Legolas were affected - if either one had eaten the whole of the pastry, it would surely have been fatal.

I'm impressed by how brisk and efficient Aragorn and the twins are - no messing around, they all know exactly what to do and do it. Their prompt actions (and thank goodness they turned up when they did!) saved both, I think.

Finally, I really like how Serai has progessed until she is able to joke with and 'bully' Elladan and Elrohir. Thank you for the 'twin moment' when they blame each other for her cheek - I love those!


Jay

JuleReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/23/2005
You are heartlessly evil and I mean that in the best way. Seriously this is a wonderful story and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Thanks for writing

Jule

Maid of IthilienReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/22/2005
An update!! :) And another cliff-hanger :( But you are so good at them. I think the conversations the characters have are wonderful. I especially liked Thranduil's comment about Gimli - “He grows on one like fungus on a tree, does he not?” Great story -- I hope you can update soon.

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