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| Stay by Aldwen | 21 Review(s) |
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| gginsc | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/16/2024 |
| Great story but leaves a lot unresolved. | |
| Ar feniel | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 12/28/2023 |
| I loved this story just like I love all your works related to the Feanorions. Especially since you portray then in a sympathetic manner rather as evil, soulless characters, without being apologetic either. I like Makalaurė Feanorian too and I am always sad for him lonely fate in Middle Earth. I am glad you gave him a happier ending. I have a question: why have you marked this work as AU? I could not find anything that clashed with Canon material in your story. Author Reply: Thank you so much! I am very glad you liked the story! Concerning your question - I am simply quite cautious with regards to the canon, and label everything that extends beyond the timeline of actual stories as AU. And Tolkien did write that Maglor is still wondering the coastlands of Middle-earth. But I could not leave him there. :) | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 11/17/2023 |
| A wonderful, most needed reunion, and the last push toward full healing for more than just Maglor. Again, thank you for this story, one that I needed to read today. Author Reply: Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I am glad you liked it, and I do appreciate feedback: that is such an encouragement to keep writing. I am looking forward to your story when it is finished! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 11/17/2023 |
| Another moment of healing, and the contemplation of Maglor's own need for more. Lovely details. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 11/17/2023 |
| But he does not know of the abduction and the wounding she suffered. He does not realize that Elrond himself is not that long reunited with the woman he loved with all of his heart, who at last sight was fading from life herself. She does not yet tell him that she was at least as badly hurt as was he ere she came to the undying lands and found healing herself. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 11/17/2023 |
| Maedhros has preceded Maglor home. It is time to enlist his experience in such healing to hearten his brother. Good enough! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/17/2023 |
| And through the acceptance of the evil he has done, he has opened the door to the accpetance of his redemption and healing, both physical and of his deeply wounded spirit as well. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 11/17/2023 |
| Too much fear and regret expended on all sides, leading to too many breakdowns in trust in self and those beloved. I rejoice that Elrond has aided Maglor, and now his son finds himself able once more to aid his father. Healing has come into this room from more than one side. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/17/2023 |
| He needs this comfort, and will soon enough realize the identity of his comforter, as will we. Wife? Brother? Celebrian? Elrond? I look forward to this realization. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/17/2023 |
| I am currently writing a Twins, Maglor, and Maedhros story, and find my own visions of the reactions of Elrond and Elros's reactions to the realizations of what their foster fathers' part in the loss of their parents much in line with yours, although not completely. I have already written my own version of how Maglor came home to the Undying Lands, but it is the end of another long story I'm still working on, and it will not be posted until I finish a good deal of middle, if you will. Am appreciating this fourth age story very much. Thank you for this. | |