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Stay  by Aldwen 26 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 9 on 11/17/2023
Maedhros has preceded Maglor home. It is time to enlist his experience in such healing to hearten his brother.

Good enough!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/17/2023
And through the acceptance of the evil he has done, he has opened the door to the accpetance of his redemption and healing, both physical and of his deeply wounded spirit as well.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 11/17/2023
Too much fear and regret expended on all sides, leading to too many breakdowns in trust in self and those beloved. I rejoice that Elrond has aided Maglor, and now his son finds himself able once more to aid his father. Healing has come into this room from more than one side.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/17/2023
He needs this comfort, and will soon enough realize the identity of his comforter, as will we. Wife? Brother? Celebrian? Elrond? I look forward to this realization.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/17/2023
I am currently writing a Twins, Maglor, and Maedhros story, and find my own visions of the reactions of Elrond and Elros's reactions to the realizations of what their foster fathers' part in the loss of their parents much in line with yours, although not completely. I have already written my own version of how Maglor came home to the Undying Lands, but it is the end of another long story I'm still working on, and it will not be posted until I finish a good deal of middle, if you will.

Am appreciating this fourth age story very much. Thank you for this.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/15/2023
Each has worried so needlessly about the other, and are caught in their grief for Estel and Arwen. Maglor should prove a much needed distraction.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/15/2023
Now, to see see after long ages of absence, his long-lost foster father!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/14/2023
Ah, but you, too, see the rains sailing in time. Now, will they find their own father's foster father, and use their gifts of Healing on him?

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/14/2023
A terrible encounter. I've written my own version of Maglor answering the Call, but have a good deal of "middle" to finish before that gets posted.

Well characterized.

SueReviewed Chapter: 12 on 11/12/2023
Loving this. You paint pictures with words and I sink into the scene as if I were living it. Oh, DO write more. Thank you.

Author Reply: Thank you!! :) So glad you like the story! There are some pieces on the way. ;) We'll see how soon I manage to finish something again.

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