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Upon Amon Sűl  by PSW 19 Review(s)
eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/16/2022
Thank the Lord, the cavalry to the rescue.
Whew PSW, you need a warning for these last few chapters.


Author Reply: Thank you! I’m happy you’re enjoying it. :-) One more chapter, I think — less stressful than these past few!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/16/2022
Whew, hope at last! This is so suspenseful.

Author Reply: :-D Happy you’re enjoying it! And yes - finally something good!

periannoreReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/31/2022
Either Aragorn is in a kind of nightmare or time loop or I'm missing something. phrases like: and the cold that he had thought all-consuming seemed suddenly a distant warmth. and tip of a sword whispered at his neck. were in chapter 4 but unlike 4 I think Aragorn's caring for a single elf, not two so each repetition has changes. In this chapter he hears his name so again you leave us wondering who is addressing him and why and what about the sword point at his neck? In my case I'm also relieved that I'm not trapped in such a hopeless dream. Oh, the many forms of evil!

Author Reply: Nightmare time loop it is! Ah, the Black Breath — a good time for all …

Thx again for your comments!

periannoreReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/31/2022
"The great crown turned toward him, and black fear drove all else from his mind. He flung himself onto the tiles, dragging his frozen cloak over him to escape the dark King’s notice." How sad that Aragorn is swamped with self doubt. He's panicked and frozen in place at the same time. Knowing the Dark King is looking at him he covers himself, flimsy protection that is no protection at all like a turtle or flamingo! With a sword tip at his neck you ended not only with a cliff hanger but with Aragorn defeated and hopeless.
Aragorn appears unable to save himself. Who will save him?
It's thrilling that in these days of very slowly trickling fanfiction you are updating so regularly.
LOTR fanfiction hangs but on a thread and if you don't keep it going, no one will! No pressure. :)

Author Reply: Lol — got it! :-D Thx for your comments, they’re much appreciated!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/29/2022
Eeee, such suspense!

Whether the journey lasted five minutes or five millennia he could not say

To go through something like this would be an unforgettable, life-changing experience.

Author Reply: Yes — you’d figure it would have to be something pretty memorable to draw his comment to the Hobbits in Bree all those years later! Thx as always for reading! :-)

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/29/2022
So dark and scary - good work!

Author Reply: Thanks! Happy you're enjoying. :-)

KateReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/23/2022
Very excited to read a new chapter! Very chilling. Looking forward to reading what happens next

Author Reply: Thanks! :-) Glad you’re enjoying it!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/23/2022
The sky, the stars, Anor and Ithil – they were no more. Perhaps they had never been.

How easy it would be to lose sanity, and all hope, in such a situation. *shivers*

Author Reply: Yes — agreed. The black breath just sounds terrible …

Thx for reading!

periannoreReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/23/2022
During his first conversation with Frodo, Sam and Pippin Aragorn mentions that he knows about the Nazgűl. I wonder if he's referring to his encounter with them in your story? Things look so grim. You did wonderfully with your description of Aragorn's battle with the inertia of the black breath. I can only read on knowing Aragorn will survive for LOTR.
I'm worried about Elrohir and Daelin. As I read any fiction I automatically Project what might happen next. In this case I'm wondering if Halbarad, Dorhaur and Elladan will arrive to help or, if they arrived first and were similarly attacked. Oh no!
You've worked up a gripping head of suspense. Write on.

Author Reply: Thank you! Glad you’re enjoying — all will be answered in due time. ;-) Thx so much for your comments!

Kate Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/22/2021
Your writing is so compelling! Looking forward to reading more

Author Reply: Thank you! I’m looking forward to writing more! (And hopefully in the not too distant future … ;-)

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