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Thranduil's Shadow  by Mimi Lind 14 Review(s)
elizaReviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/6/2021
Wow, glad to see a few more chapters. lol, I didn't have computer access for afew days (talk about withdrawal).

This was a sweet chapter, personally I would have made old Thranduil sweat a bit before forgiving him. I like Aerneth, she has spunk and not afraid to show it.

Great chapter.

Author Reply: Thanks! Yes, I decided it's easier to just put all the chapters up, that I had already published on AO3. From now on I will publish as I write them, so it will be around twice a month or so.

Yes, Aerneth was way too easy on him haha. But she's too much in love to do otherwise... Glad you like her! I've tried to make both of them kind of 'flawed', and realistic (I hope).

elizaReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/2/2021
LOL, well at least I can now say it's not only human males that are astoundingly stupid.

Yikes, Thranduil is going to have to really do some serious begging. It is an interesting dichotomy between this younger Thranduil and the portrayal of him as an adult.

I really like how you have entwined some funny scenes in this chapter.

looking forward to seeing how our king gets himself out of this one.

Author Reply: Thanks for the review!

Yes, hehe, I'm trying to make my elves a bit like they seem in the Silmarillion: real people who make mistakes. I also like to think that very young elves, like he is here, are less wise!

He will grow into that cool, stiff Elvenking in the course of the story, and I will also show the reasons behind this transformation.

Thanks for reading!

MirkwoodmaidenReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/2/2021
Mimi Lind!

I too love Thranduil always have actually. I really like the prologue. Poor Thranduil. I do feel for him. I think I will enjoy this!

MM

Author Reply: Oh, thanks a lot! Glad to find a fellow Thranduil-fan!
In this story it takes a while until he becomes the cool king... some trauma happens first. :/

elizaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/19/2021
Great chapter, I actually feel bad for poor Thranduil, it must be frustrating having to deal with an obstinate parent. I too tried a long distance relationship after college. I don't have the patience. lol

very nice story, suspenseful and the characters are great. can't wait to see how it goes with Thranduil.

Author Reply: Thanks a lot! I had just decided this site was inactive and to stop posting, and then I see your nice comment. :)

Yes, long distance relationships are super hard to maintain... Which Thranduil shall be aware of the hard way. :/


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