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| Bombur's Diet by Primsong | 29 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/9/2008 |
| Oh, how I feel for the poor dwarf! This will be torture for poor Bombur, and such a delight for us! | |
| Kitt Otter | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/9/2008 |
| Oh dear, this is too funny! Hmph! Just a one fowl and just a loaf of bread. Yep, Bombur is going to wasts away pretty fast. And carrots? Carrots! Poor Bombur - that is not my idea of dessert either. Although the addition of butter does make 'em sound tasty. -Kitt | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/9/2008 |
| LOLOL! *grin* Poor Bombur! Of course, the Dwarves aren't going about it very scientifically. *giggle* I wonder what they'd make of all the hundreds of diet books in the world today? But I do have to agree on one thing: carrots and a pickle are not the most pleasant of desserts! And I loved how sympathetic Bilbo was: "I've never done it--voluntarily..." Oh my, this is so funny! | |
| DrummerWench | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/8/2008 |
| Yay! What fun, more Bilbo and the Dwarves! I just love the interactions among them all. Please keep it up! | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/7/2008 |
| *grin* I am grinning like a loon. I do so love your Bilbo--and poor Bombur! When even a hobbit thinks he's eating too much, well, it's definitely a good indicator that a small change might be in order! I loved the interactions you have between Bilbo and the Dwarves--this is so delightful! | |
| Kitt Otter | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/6/2008 |
| Oooh, I LOVE Bombur; next to Thorin he is my favorite of the Company. He is as good-natures (and dense) as ever. He should have an honor bestowed upon him by being able to eat more than a hobbit. You are good at making a fun and brisk narrative, sprinkled with "bites" of description. I am very happy to have found this today! -Kitt : ) | |
| Soledad | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/6/2008 |
| Poor Bombur. His only delight is eating and he should have restrain himself for heath's sake. Although, out-eating a hobbit is no small feat, I guess. :)) | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/6/2008 |
| Poor Bombur--finally reaching the prophesized excess weight! Heh! And we wonders what ripped, we do. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/6/2008 |
| Ah, our Bombur is being particularly, and probably intentionally, dense today, isn't he? And when even a Hobbit can't keep up, there IS a problem! Heh! | |