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| Bombur's Diet by Primsong | 29 Review(s) |
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| 6336 | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/21/2008 |
| Ah, poor Bombur, I quite like raw cabbage! Lynda | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/21/2008 |
| Now, this is insulting--slaw as a snack! And after all that work! Poor Bombur--love the description of him as a jelly in a bag--a worthy comparison for a Hobbit! Heh! Nah, no need for these Dwarves to make it to the inn for their evening pint, perhaps; but Bombur has achieved dimensions to impress even a Hobbit! Heh! | |
| Kitt Otter | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/20/2008 |
| "Every time I think about eating I eat. It's much simpler." - Too true!! I guess that the exercise did not got all according to plan. Such a whiner our round Dwarf is. Bilbo's observance of Bombur's movement was hilarious. I never thought to bring tea out on a walk; if it were not so hot I'd take a cue from Bilbo. I am chorkling myself silly over the ending. Cabbage. My, my. I just got done with a cookie myself and I feel very bad for him. Of course Bombur isn't too disgusted not to eat it. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/17/2008 |
| Poor Bombur--a healthy lifestyle just ISN'T for him! How delightful! Now, to see how the walk went.... | |
| Kitt Otter | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/17/2008 |
| I chuckled pretty hard in this chapter. Bombur is sure the whiner! Frankly, this made me hungry. "Stop talking about me as if I weren't here," Bombur complained. - my favorite line. I cannot wait to see how this walk turns out. *g* Kitt | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/14/2008 |
| Ah--most delightful! And Bilbo is wise enough to let him have something, at least. Love the conversation with the stomach! Such wonderful comments it makes! Heh! | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/14/2008 |
| This is so much fun. And as someone who is trying not to turn into Bombur herself I do feel for him! | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/14/2008 |
| Oh, this is the funniest chapter yet, from Bombur's conversation with his stomach to Bifur's fright at Bilbo's appearance (I splorked at the line "What do you want me to wear a wig to wake you up?" LOLOLOL!) And then catching Bombur in the act: all the time when Bifur was confronting him, I kept wonderting where Bilbo was. I should have known. And then--Bilbo's little bit of soft-heartedness at the end, just made me go "awww...." I do love your Bilbo so much! | |
| Neilia | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/13/2008 |
| I have been enjoying this jolly tale immensely! Poor Bombur, it is hard to learn new eating habits...really hard...I haven't learned yet! Hugs, Neilia | |
| Kitt Otter | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/13/2008 |
| Oh, bad, bad Bombur! His conversations with his stomach are wonderful... no, maybe disturbing. *g* Lucky that Bilbo woke; geesh, Bifur and Bofur do have their hands full. Bilbo really should be more careful about whose sleep he intrudes. (He has quite a bad history of it). Ha, Bilbo is too clever. His appearence in Bombur's room gave me a jump. *laughing* Very nice of the former Burgler to slip Bombur the pie. By the way, I love the chapter titles. -Kitt : ) | |