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A Cat in King Elessar's Court  by Agape4Gondor 386 Review(s)
SarasratiReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/30/2008
I like the way the cat (not even going to try spelling her name...) regards Denethor. Very loyal, but sensible at the same time. She is a very unique and interesting character, and I look forward to reading more of this.

Author Reply: Thanks Sarasrati! Sensible - yes, Algualonde likes that description and thanks you.

PS - I will post another chapter of 10,000 soon, it's almost ready....

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/30/2008
A worthwhile ambition, considering what the Anor Stone did to Denethor son of Ecthelion. I rather like the cat, in spite of its eavesdropping.

Author Reply: Ah - but to the cat, dearest Larner, it is not eavesdropping. It is duty. It is all for Gondor.

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/30/2008
Ah yes, poor dear Pip does speak too easily, or at least, doesn't realize he tells more than just his words alone.

I like that Alqualondë and Shadowfax part as friends and that they each recognize the other's intelligence.

She's right about that globe!

Wonderful Agape!

Author Reply: Hi, Pearl... still waiting for your next chapter! Been a great ride so far!

As for Pip - you and I both know that, even though he tries, those of great wisdom can 'read between the lines' so to speak of this dear Hobbit.

And you are right... Alqualonde knows a bit about famous horses and famous globes and which to trust and which not to!

ClaudiaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/30/2008
Now this is a really cool idea - Pippin's experience in Minas Tirith through the eyes of a cat! :-))

Author Reply: Thanks, Claudia... with only a hiccup now and again, I think this will be fun!

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/30/2008
This is fascinating so far! I love getting the POV of the cat, his steadfast loyalty to the Steward--and yet, I think, he does have an idea of what may happen. He's a very wise cat, to hate the palantir.

I also love his observations of Pippin--even a cat falls to his Tookish charm! It's amusing that the thing which draws his approval the most is Pippin's hunger! Very feline, indeed!

Author Reply: As unconcerned as some cats can seem, food always brings out the 'cat' in them! LOL

He gratefully thanks you for noting his 'wisdom' and his loyalty.

SurgicalSteelReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/30/2008
Sensible cat, wanting to get rid of the palantir.

Author Reply: Don't you just wish someone had done it long ago!!!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/30/2008
It's lovely that the cat 'introduced himself' to Shadowfax. I hope he's eventually able to 'introduce himself' to Pippin, and the other hobbits!

Author Reply: Hello, shirebound,

I'm pretty sure Pip and Alqua will be properly introduced... along with perhaps an Elf and a Dwarf and such???

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/29/2008
I like the way Alqualondë met with Shadowfax. Two intelligent beings come to know one another with a few looks and nods. I love the fact that Alqualondë has picked up on the fact that Pippin talks freely too. Very like a cat to know it all. Alqualondë views on Denethor's struggles to save Gondor were well thought out too. Lovely chapter! Beregond would do well to watch his step. Someone is listening.

Author Reply: Hello GW ! Great to hear from you.

I could just imagine the two sizing each other up and finally respecting each other! That was such fun to write - though it was only a moment.

As for Pippin, throughout the chapter, Minas Tirith, he tries to watch his mouth - however, our cat is pretty knowledgeable of people (Hobbits included) and easily discerns the lay of this one!

Thanks for the comment about Denethor - much as I love the Steward, the cat will NOT let me make this a tale about Denethor...

Beregond's attitude is noted!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/21/2008
Interesting spy network Denethor has--a cat and a palantir. Makes for a well-prepared ruler for the nation! Heh!

Author Reply: He needs rugrats too - but I think they'd be too afraid of him!

Beruthiel's cats were definitely used as spies... I just thought they'd try to keep that 'strain' of giftedness going!

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/20/2008
Such a wee spy Denethor sends to be his eyes and ears! I'm glad she has the good sense to see things of interest in the Halfling.

Cats are so clever ;-)

This is a delight, Agape!

Author Reply: Thanks very much, Pearl. It will be interesting to see which way her loyalties will lie... Pip is very easy to fall in love with!

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