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| Day and Night by Peredhil lover | 46 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/9/2007 |
| Twenty and on patrol, is he? Lovely remembering of his birthday. | |
| sammijoy | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/12/2007 |
| What an awesome story! I enjoyed it immensely! Sammi Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing this one too, Sammi! I always love to get new reviews. It's nice to know that my older stories are still being read. peredhil lover | |
| jack bauer | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/15/2007 |
| I loved this little story, and so much potential for more. I think it would have been fascinating to find out exactly how the House of Elrond saw little Estel change into the man who'd be king. So of course you should keep going! What is Elrond's reaction to Estel's heroics? Guarded surprise or a sly smiling of knowing? Heh. Anyway, great work. Author Reply: Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm glad to know you enjoyed the story. peredhil lover | |
| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/14/2007 |
| Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your story. I love the interaction between the twins and Estel. Glorfindel was smart to bring Estel along. His brothers got to learn what he can do. Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing, grumpy. Reviews are always appreciated! I'm glad that you enjoyed the interactions between the characters, and, yup, Glorfindel certainly is one wise ancient elf lord! peredhil lover | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/14/2007 |
| Such a relief for Elrohir! He has them both out safe and sound - and he can counsel the younger rescuee wisely, while leaving his older brother to the wisdom of Glorfindel. It must be disconcerting for both of them - Estel to find that he can heal in a way that I daresay he only thought was possible for elf lords, and Elladan to realise that this might well be the heir for whom they have all been hoping. Very symbolic sunset - at what is, in some ways, the beginning of the end. Author Reply: You're right, both Estel and Elladan are in need of wise counsel and both have a lot to think about. It does leave much scope for a sequel. Yes the sunset is symbolic, on more than one level. It does mark the beginning of one end, but also a new start. Thanks for reviewing Bodkin. peredhil lover | |
| BM | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/13/2007 |
| this was a wonderful story! I really liked how you portrayed the elves and Estel, and think that you kept very true to Tolkien's world. Great storyline and very descriptive and colorful writing--I could picture it all happening in my mind's eye. You've done a great job--please, keep writing more! Author Reply: I'm always happy to have a new reviewer! Thank-you for your kind comments, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I do have ideas for further adventures for Elladan, Elrohir and Estel, and hearing that other people are interested in reading more really does motivate me to get writing. Thanks again, peredhil lover | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/13/2007 |
| Nice conclusion, with Estel and Elladan both wrestling with questions of identity and their future. Author Reply: Thanks, daw, I'm glad you liked the conclusion. Both Estel and Elladan are left with a lot of questions and plenty to ponder, but such is life most of the time, and experiences are rarely wrapped up in a tidy ending. There is always room for a sequel. Thanks for reviewing faithfully, I really appreciate it. peredhil lover | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/13/2007 |
| Great start - I've been wanting to read this - but have had no time. Once I saw it was complete, I decided to make time. Looking forward to the further adventures! Loved the tension... Author Reply: I'm glad you found the time. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Agape4Gondor and I hope you continue to enjoy it! peredhil lover | |
| French Pony | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/12/2007 |
| Yeah, well, no pressure there, Elladan! I liked the introspective tone of this last chapter. Both Estel and Elladan have quite a bit to think about, and their relationship will probably never be the same again. Also interesting is that Elrohir doesn't seem to have nearly the same issues with the world as Elladan. I like that. It makes the twins seem like two separate people instead of interchangeable names. Author Reply: Thanks for sticking with the story and reviewing, French Pony, I appreciate it. Both Estel and Elladan have been left with a lot to think about, and it does leave a lot open for a sequel. Hopefully, I'll get around to writing it! ;-) peredhil lover | |
| Laureleaf | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/10/2007 |
| I had to catch up - pesky life demands attention every once and again - and truely enjoyed the latest chapters. Finally! I'm glad Elladan is finally begining to *see* Estel as the man he is rather then something that is in constant need of protection...I imaging he will have much to think on in the coming chapters. I look forward to more. Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing Laureleaf. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. Yes, Elladan has started to see Estel in a different light, and does have a lot to think about. The next chapter will be the last one of this story, but there are a lot of ideas brought up here that I would like to explore in future stories if I ever get around to writing them. Thanks again, peredhil lover | |