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| Keeper of the Jewels by Cuthalion | 12 Review(s) |
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| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/20/2006 |
| She realized that actually there was no gem she could use to describe Aragorn, son of Arathorn, Elessar, king of Gondor. In a sudden epiphany she understood that what she saw was the essence of the ancient kingdom, burning in his flesh with a fierce, golden flame. Wow! Beautifully written, Cuthalion! I'm really glad that Sam and Aragorn could be rescued. I had not the slightest doubt that any of the three hobbits would have agreed to remain on safer ground. Not them - and not after the quest! The Ringbearer narrowed his eyes, crossed his arms and gave him an icy glare of complete refusal. Ha! The Look! There it is again. While Merry and Pippin have to think up lots of arguments, Frodo only needs one look! Really impressive! Now, Artanis saved Aragorn's life - and was wounded by her own father. How severe that wound is, I cannot guess. But from the text I'd say she'll live. She never knew for sure later... So, let's hope there will be a "later" for Artanis. What she experienced and did is one of the most difficult situations for a daughter I can imagine! Author Reply: Severe enough, but even poisoned wounds are able to heal. Thank you so much for your lovely comment! Cúthalion | |
| SurgicalSteel | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/20/2006 |
| A lovely treat on a gloomy morning while I wait for my first patient to arrive - I especially liked Artanis' mental imagery, comparing the various persons she meets to gems. Loved that her father met his end on a hobbit's blade, loved the banter between Pippin and Merry. You paint Artanis quite vividly - the woman who's been chronically emotionally abused by her father, who still has trouble betraying him despite the fact she knows it's the right thing to do, who still hopes desperately for paternal approval. Just lovely! Author Reply: Thank you - that is praise from the praiseworthy! And I have grown rather fond of Artanis, though I found her rather difficult to handle at first. She is a strange mixturee of strength and weakness, of humor and despair - not easy to write, but definetely interesting. Thank you! Cúthalion | |