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Shadows of a Nameless Fear  by Budgielover 15 Review(s)
ArielReviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/30/2006
Oh, dear! The queen of the cliffhanger strikes again! Poor Pippin! Poor Frodo! Poor me who has to wait for the next chapter!

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/30/2006
I'm really enjoying this story. I especially like the way you write Elladan and Elrohir, who have always been my favourite characters. They're skilled, deadly warriors, powerful elf-lords, but caring and understanding at the same time. It makes a wonderful change from all the stories where they are idiotic practical jokers. And I just love Elladan's horse!

Poor Pippin, though - there may be one less orc to worry about, but that's not much comfort.

Jay

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/30/2006
And so the tension is raised to ever greater heights! Can it go any higher without one of your readers bursting a blood vessel? *g*

Absolutely brilliant use of the palantir. And I think it is great the way that it recognises Pippin. And you made my heart wrench with the sudden distance between Gandalf and Aragorn.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/30/2006
Well - we know where Sam and Frodo are. Elrond's stentorian screaming is bringing Elladan, Elrohir, Merry and thug to their side. One orc has been disposed of by his fellow-nasties - but Pippin is still out there! And suffering in the hands of two with a taste for fingers! And, although it's a good thing that Aragorn has used the Palantir to discover his whereabouts - he is right at the top of the White City and Pippin is right at the bottom. And there's no telephone system.

Rescue the hobbit!

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 16 on 10/29/2006
*squirms* Oh, another cliff-hanger! One of these days I'm going to write a fic with lots and lots of them, and when I do it will be dedicated to you! Ha ha! :) But it's good that they now know where Pippin is. Interesting that Aragorn decided to use the Palantir. I was afraid they wouldn't find him in time! Now if they can just get to him before the Orcs do something horrible to him!
God bless,
Galadriel

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