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| Shadows of a Nameless Fear by Budgielover | 18 Review(s) |
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| Elemmírë | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/11/2006 |
| Uh oh! Me smells trouble. I hope Pippin's uniform includes his sword this day. The sedan chair idea was kinda cool ... different for the hobbits to experience. Although I have a distinct feeling that Frodo will be soon needing a litter instead. :) I really liked the part when Elrond is describing the various damages that can be inflicted via a kick from a hobbit's foot ... the ruptured organs, etc. Working in a hospital, I always enjoy those little medical details you throw in. Your desrciptions of Frodo's reactions to the throng of adoring people of Minas Tirit was very well done. I felt like I was there and could see just how uncomfortable this little hobbit of the Shire, who'd never left his home before despite wanting adventure, would feel being gawked at by so many. It was nice to see the people keeping their respect for him and Sam, however, and Mikah acting as a bouncer was a fine example of this. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Author Reply: *grins* You have a good nose, I think... I'm glad you enjoyed the scenes you mentioned. It always fascinates me to find out what people resonate to - in your case the tiny bit of medical detail. I usually plot my stories in advance, including chapter ends, but you would be surprised how much that outline varies according to what people respond to. Thank you for your review! | |
| Periantari | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/10/2006 |
| OH no! i do not like those strangers! ::Frets fro Frodo :: :( Faramir ought not to have left them... I liked this Legolas quote: “I have never been attacked by a hobbit before,” Legolas mused, rubbing his stomach carefully. “I shall have to treat those large, hairy feet with more respect.” lol! i love your humor that is interspersed in this with the action and the h/c. :) And i love Merry's suggestion about the sedan chair! lol I can't wait for more. :) Author Reply: You are so encouraging, Periantari - thank you! You won't have to wait long - chapter five is finished but for a bit of polishing, and six is well on its way. Soon, I promise! | |
| Queen Galadriel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/10/2006 |
| Oh no! I see the signs--four unguarded Hobbits, Faramir not near enough to help, three obviously suspicious characters who are armed and by their own account want Frodo. They'll have a struggle, though. Oh, I hope they don't get him! On a lighter note, of course Pippin would charm the whole city! :) That was so cute that everyone wanted to give him treats! :) I love Mikah! He reminds me a little of one of my best friends' father. :) Please update soon! God bless, Galadriel Author Reply: *laughs* Yes, Your Majesty, the writing is on the wall. Chapter five is done but needs a little polishing, and six is half done. You shouldn't have too long a wait! | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/10/2006 |
| Pippin was piled with so many sweets and treats he could scarcely walk. He accepted each little gift with heartfelt thanks, and beamed back at the circle of charmed, happy faces shining at him. Frodo turned to Merry for an explanation. Merry grimaced, but his eyes were glowing with pride. “He’s their Periannath,” Merry said. “I think it best if I carry you back.” Frodo stiffened, and Sam winced. Sitting on either side of Faramir, Merry and Pippin tried to unobtrusively inch away from the soon-to-be unfortunate Man. Awww. This is so full of wonderful things. But Budgie, not... not ruffians!? *hides* Author Reply: Yes, ruffians ... and worse. But good things to come! (Er ... eventually.) Thank you again for letting me know what parts you like - you would be surprised to know how much that helps me shape a story! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/10/2006 |
| Oh, dear--kidnappers--I mean Hobbitnappers! Alas and alack! Trouble is back! Sam had best begin keeping an eye out. And what skullduggery are these not-so-fine fellows planning? Do they desire gold or goods or political advantage of some sort, or what? And who is sponsoring them, we wonders? Okay, waiting for the next chapter. Author Reply: Yesssss ... we wondersss, we does... and who is behind it all, Precious? Not who you think... (See what you started? It's contagious.) | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/10/2006 |
| Uh-oh! It's fun seeing someone else's take on the perils of fame for our four lads in the City after the Quest--but I am quite certain, knowing you, that the plotters in the corner mean a good deal more harm than my con men did in "Chance Encounter"! I am glad Frodo does not remember what happened the night before--he would have been completely mortified, especially if he found out about kicking Legolas. I loved the line about hobbit feet. Yes, I think a hobbit kick would feel pretty bad! And I like the way Gandalf manages his conversations with both Frodo and Aragorn. I am wondering what our good old wizard is up to. I really like the way Merry takes charge here, and the way he has never ceased conspiring for Frodo's sake. And Faramir is great as well. But I think he will be sorry that he had to leave them in the inn... Author Reply: Ah, the webs we weave... I agree, Dreamflower, poor Faramir will be very sorry he left the hobbits. And my villians don't have a single redeeming feature and are about to do something utterly despictable. Thank you for enjoying Merry in this fic - even though he is about to make a big mistake. Oh, I often wonder who has the most fun - we writers or our readers? | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/10/2006 |
| Ooh, a cliffie you evil author, you! :-) Post soon pleeeese! This is wonderful reading. Author Reply: TO which I reply ... heh, heh, heh. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story! | |
| eiluj | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/10/2006 |
| Oh, dear. You're going to kidnap that poor hobbit *again*? Author Reply: Erm ... yes? Of course, it's not me, you understand. As I have explained to the Frodoll sitting on my desk, it's nothing personal. It's just so much fun. My Frodoll is looking terrified and planning an escape with Samdoll. | |