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Dreamflower's Mathoms II  by Dreamflower 12 Review(s)
Mum's the WordReviewed Chapter: 42 on 10/7/2007
Oh, this was very effective! Using the smaller font to make the others' voices seem small and thin was brilliantly done, and a perfect match for your excellent storytelling.

I could just feel the tension and Frodo's wavering between the spirit world and the tangible world.

Beautifully done, as always, Dreamflower!

Author Reply: I'm glad that the smaller font worked to give the feeling I was hoping for! It was very hard to format, but I think it was worth it.

Thank you for your very kind words!!

AntaneReviewed Chapter: 42 on 10/7/2007
What a terrible struggle and it was only just beginning. *hugs them all* Thank God that Frodo had so many guardians on his journey, seen and unseen. He needed them all.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author Reply: Yes, just the beginning of seventeen days of nightmare.

Frodo did indeed need all who loved him.

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