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Okay, NOW Panic!  by Boz4PM 12 Review(s)
MopsyReviewed Chapter: 57 on 9/1/2008
Oh, KISS DA GIRL!

I loved this chapter - so sweet and melancholy! The gifts were lovely - very sweet. Lindir's especially - and the song! Their friendship seems so real. It was a very nice image - the Hall of Fire filled with people, and Penny and LIndir sharing a little in-joke in front of them all - Penny laughing and crying. I will really miss him, Mireth and the rest of the Elves when Penny goes north.

I'm still in love with Erestor...the little still life he set up for Penny confirmed it. What a doll.

Arvain is such a sweetie! And somewhat caught in the middle of Penny and Halladan.

Faelon's little moment talking about his beard and his wife was sweet, too. All in all, bravo. I want the next chapter, yet I don't, because I don't want the story to end! :)



Author Reply: lol!

Thank you. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it all. I will miss writing the elves too, I will admit. Next chapter is written and hopefully will be posted fairly soon.

el_estelethReviewed Chapter: 57 on 9/1/2008
Very enjoyable last two chapters. I have only just now gotten to read the chapter before this one and enjoyed that one and this very much. And I'm happy at least Penny and Halladan got a chance to talk and return things to a less strained type feeling. Bilbo is hilarious. I always enjoy when he's in the chapters. Overall, two very enjoyable chapters.

Es.

Author Reply: Thank you - glad you enjoyed them both.

Bilbo has been a real hoot to write these last few chapters. :D

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