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| Okay, NOW Panic! by Boz4PM | 12 Review(s) |
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| Fantasia | Reviewed Chapter: 53 on 6/16/2008 |
| This is great! She is in love with Halladan, I love this chapter, I mean, I can feel all her emotions, the butterflies in her stomach and the frustrations. What a wonderful time, when you only live for a smile of your beloved and when you are trying to imagine what it is his head, and you imagine all the worst possible scenarios except that he might be in love with you too. I always like your stories, but now I can't wait for more... Thanks for posting, you made my day (I'm working right now and boring, but I can work the whole day now because Penny and Halladan) Thanks. Author Reply: So glad you felt able to empathise with her - it was very important that not just her obvious feelings for him but her thought process carried readers through, i.e. they could see/feel/understand why she was thinking what she was thinking - her reasoning. Thanks for reading and commenting! :) | |
| Mopsy | Reviewed Chapter: 53 on 6/16/2008 |
| Argh! So exciting! She's in love. :D Poor Penny, I really do go through all her emotions with her. You write so sympathetically. Author Reply: I'm glad you think so - thank you for that. :D | |