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| Okay, NOW Panic! by Boz4PM | 12 Review(s) |
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| aelfwine | Reviewed Chapter: 42 on 2/7/2007 |
| Great chapter. Thanks for updating. I can't believe that Corunir intends to just leave being snubbed without seeking some revenge. He may not have any feelings for penni but an ego like his is going to want to take being embarressed in front of his friends out of penni's hide. ( I look forward to seeing him getting his ass kicked by one or more people ) Author Reply: Thanks - next chapter will reveal if you're correct or not and it will be coming very soon (within a week maximum, I reckon, if not a lot less). :) | |
| el_esteleth | Reviewed Chapter: 42 on 2/7/2007 |
| Very well done! Excellent. Just wonderful. This entire chapter (half of a chapter?) was very moving and very well-written. Your ability to write characters with whom your audience can sympathise is wonderful, and IMHO, has continued to improve and grow as you've written these two stories. I continue to be impressed and to learn things about writing from your characterizations. Absolutely wonderful. Thank you for sharing. I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Thank you again. Es. Author Reply: Thank you - glad you enjoyed it all, and that you think my characterisation is improving. I have learnt a lot writing this and while I would not change a word of Don't Panic, I do think you can see a progression of sorts, not simply in the story (obviously), but in my writing. | |