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| Your Heart Will Be True by Write Sisters | 165 Review(s) |
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| Vilwarin | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/5/2006 |
| Aw, a happy family reunion. It seems like the children got a lot from their father *lol*. This serves him right, I should say. He has to swallow a bit of his own medicin there. "If so I'll have to write home to Diamond that Sam and his Rosie should make their visit to us soon. He's very keen on oliphaunts." This made me laugh. It is so very much like Pippin. Always talking without thinking first. I loved this chapter, beautifully written. You succeeded to introduce the chracters in the two chapters very well, it sounds natural and does not overwhelm the reader. Until next time ~Vil Author Reply: *laughs* Oh my, yes! A whole lot of Aragorn going around -- and you're right, all such debts of mischief must evenutally come due. It's Aragorn's misfortune that, while he was only one trouble-maker, his tricks are being revisited upon him three-fold. Mwahaha! *grin* Glad to hear you like Pippin! Our first ever attempt with a cannon hobbit; we didn't want to mess him up. Thanks for the wonderful feedback! | |
| Vilwarin | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/5/2006 |
| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/3/2006 |
| This story sounds wonderful so far. I love how you have set the scene of peace in Gondor when we know what is about to occur. Can't help wondering though if the queen has taken into account the help that will be given by the elves, especially Legolas. I have now decided to look up your other stories and watch the trailer! Author Reply: Thank you, Kitty! Overlooking Legolas has certainly been a mistake many villains have made in the past. But is Mavranor as superior to those villains as she seems to think...? *angelic smile* We are very flattered at your interest in our other stories! Please, by all means, help yourself! A lot of these characters will make more sense if you do. *smiles* | |
| Vilwarin | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/3/2006 |
| Ah, how wonderful to finally read the story! I have been waiting for it for ages *lol*. Very well written, I can feel the tension still lingering in the air! A ruthless queen out for vengeance , killing all that stand in her way. ou showed well the fear the others have. What could be the other plan? I am looking so forward to find out. Uh, I really thought Duurben was being attacked. The attacker came to me as a great surprise and te lovely scene made the knowledge of what is going to happen to Gondor all the more horribe. I am so happy to finally read high quality fanfiction again already love the story. Update soon, please ~Vil Author Reply: How equally wonderful to see you! We're glad you're enjoying it so far -- the beginning, rather like the ending, was re-written a fair bit. As for the other plan... *studiously innocent look* We hope to update every other day, but crave your indulgence if we we occasionally miss a day. *grin* | |
| Inga | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/3/2006 |
| Very nice beginning of a story. I canīt wait to read further. Iīd like to read your other fics, too, but I canīt find them on this site. Where do I have to search?? Author Reply: Sorry for not leaving a link! The rest of our stories are on FF.net at this link: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/253178/ Someday we hope to re-edit them and post them here on Stories of Arda, but we lack the free time just now. *grin* | |