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| Paradox of the Fourth Age by Alassante | 98 Review(s) |
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| Roche Reyes | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 4/6/2009 |
| I was captivated by the story...I wanted to finish it faster...i enjoyed reading it...i wish to be informed when the story continues...thank you for making me escape reality and enter a world of adventure and romance... | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 1/26/2009 |
| Grief, after all, is as much a part of life as is joy. It is not an easy thing to think of, the death to come of a child and a brother's wife. But without risking the loss, one cannot know the attendant joy. | |
| pipinhert | Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 1/24/2009 |
very nice... Poor Laureanna, here she beilieves her children will die, and thinks it is best not to have children. Elladna finds love, but will her be cursed to loose her. Here you have Elrond knowing the fate his children may bear, that must be a curse to him. Is thier any way that they can alter thier futures... Very nice... | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 1/13/2009 |
| Nice.... You feel for Laureanne, she has met new friends and gladriel has asked her to look in the mirror. i wonder who is the blonde boy who looks at her intently and doesn't move and does she loose some of her children, it makes you wonder if she saves the past only to loose what is important to her for some reason.... Very nice....Update soon... | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 1/13/2009 |
| Definitely a distressing vision for her. And the loss of memories would be most distressing indeed! | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 12/19/2008 |
| Very Lovely... Laureanna sure seems to need help and it is good that Elrond was sent to aid her. They are all parting, but it does make sense that Legolas and Laureanna will loose thier memories for a time. Since she has slipped up it could cause problems. At Least her parents seem to be getting together.... Nice read, continue soon... | |
| ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 12/7/2008 |
| *spoilers* I'm so glad they got back to Imladris. I'm glad Elrohir is going to stay with her too, the little rat for even thinking about not staying with her! Glad the Valar will be altering memories so Leggy will have an earier time of things away from her and glad that Elrond now knows the truth . That will be a great help to her. It was delightful to see that Glorfy is with Indil now - paying her "lipservice" if nothing else (hahahahaha!) Can't wait for the next chapter! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 12/5/2008 |
| So very gentle a chapter as they each begin to find the peace they need, and Elrond learns the truth of his new daughter. How difficult this knowledge must be for him. Well done. | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 11/1/2008 |
| Poor, laureanna. Her parents are together, but glorfindel is hiding himself away from her, because Elladan is charming her. I am sure they will find a way to each other, but poor Laureann is so anxious... Please continue.... Author Reply: Love will find a way....maybe ;)~ | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 10/30/2008 |
| Ah--it appears EVERYONE is seeking to interfere! Poor Laureanna has no idea she's not alone in this at the moment, and Glorfindel's own heart is being stirred as we speak! Heh! Author Reply: Poor Laureanna might have to beat her father if he doesn't follow his heart :) | |