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| Moments in Time by Larner | 13 Review(s) |
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| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 33 on 6/17/2007 |
| While I've been reading, rereading and appreciating this wonderful masterpiece you've had two reviews. You've managed to capture the true essence of each contributor so well. I happily quote it all back to you but if I have to pick then I would go for Aragorn, Pippin, Sam, Merry, Esme and Pal, .....and all the rest! One to print out!!!! Author Reply: Thank you so, Harrowcat. So, you like Pippin's especially? I'm glad, for he's indeed one who would see to the depths while on the surface he appeared a mere giddy youngling. Three reviews now, at least, and I'm so glad you feel this is indeed a keeper. Thank you so--I'm truly honored. Thank you. | |
| Armariel | Reviewed Chapter: 33 on 6/17/2007 |
| Oh wonderful!!! Let me see now....the first verse is: Aragorn speaking, the next one is Sam, then Merry, then Pippin, then...Esmeralda? then Galadriel, Arwen, Eru? and the last is all together.....correct? I think I like the next to last verse best...but all are lovely! See, you CAN write niccceeee poemsessss....... Author Reply: The drive between home and work has become a time when ideas start working on me, if I don't have a cassette book or some such thing to listen to, at least. And last night that cadence began insinuating itself. I'm not truly a poet, and there are a few places here where the scanning bothers me even now, but at least it works. Actually I'd thought Gandalf rather than Galadriel, but she could easily be the one; and I wasn't certain if the last was all together or perhaps Gimli or Legolas--they let me hear their verse, but not make out the voices. Sometimes I hear what I write; sometimes I see it. This time it was the former. And thank you for the vote of confidence. I'm nowhere near your quality, I suspect. Thanks again. (And poor Gollum didn't get written here, did he? Poor thing! Left out again!) | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 33 on 6/17/2007 |
| I made thee for gladness, for wonder, for singing, a beacon of Joy all might see. The path, it lies open, the way set before you that leads through rejoicing to Me. How beautiful, Larner. A truly lovely Song and message for our dear Frodo. Author Reply: I'm so grateful you appreciated that portion especially, Shirebound. Hopefully I'll be able to read more today. | |