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| Moments in Time by Larner | 16 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 28 on 3/9/2007 |
| Lovely! I enjoyed every word. Author Reply: I'm so glad you did, GW. Thank you! | |
| Beruthiels Cat | Reviewed Chapter: 28 on 3/9/2007 |
| Larner, I am positively green with envy...you make it look so easy! A lovely story, and Sam is my absolute favorite of the hobbits... BC Author Reply: Make it look so easy? I'm flattered indeed. Thank you, so, BC. As for me, I love them all (okay, perhaps Frodo and Aragorn more than all the rest). Thanks again. | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 28 on 3/9/2007 |
| Stunning, Larner, just stunning. Author Reply: Thank you so much, Dreamflower! | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 28 on 3/9/2007 |
| the water spilling and singing in it as it filled and the overflow rained down in gladness on the pool below where silver and golden fishes swam. the coming of a ship they had great hope would bring to them the golden treasure they’d left behind How beautiful, Larner. This is more poem than story. Author Reply: I'm so glad you found those two lines particularly moving, Shirebound; and I was trying for a "misty" feel to this one--perhaps similar to how I think a mortal within Lothlorien might feel at the time. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 28 on 3/9/2007 |
| It never even occurred to me to wonder what happened to Galadriel's basin. This is so fitting. And I like the way the grotto was created by hobbit, dwarf, and elf, each contributing. I hope whatever Sam glimpsed gave him peace. Author Reply: I just found that basin and ewer nudging at me yesterday after I finished writing chapter eight of my other story. And it was nice to think there would be some inter-racial cooperation on this one. As for what Sam saw or didn't see or thought he saw or knew he saw--he's not telling, and neither am I. Heh! Thanks. | |
| Pearl Took | Reviewed Chapter: 28 on 3/9/2007 |
| This is wondrous, mystical and magical. A work of art, Larner! "The water ran slightly more freely now, as if now that it had a pool to disport itself in it felt free to explore and play." Beautiful! Author Reply: Oh, am glad I was able to communicate that feeling properly. Thanks indeed, Pearl. | |