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The Tenth Walker  by Lindelea 773 Review(s)
Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/11/2006
Ugh! Poor Bill - you make the midges so very vivid, I can almost see and hear the wretched things.

It's sad in a way that Frodo still carries his mother's handkerchief, but sweet that he uses it like this. I doubt Primula would mind.


Jay

Author Reply: BTDT. Tramping through the "muskeg" on the border of Canada and the US, surrounded by mosquitoes and biting flies and, yes, something like midges too, though I think we had a different name for them, that I cannot recall at the moment. O wait, I remember, we called them no-see-ems. Wretched.

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/10/2006
Aw poor Bill - that awful stable is still calling. I especially liked

More than ever I wish there were another pony to share the load; this night we could stand head-to-tail and brush the flies from each others' faces.

And then he proceeds to do just that with Merry! I also loved his names/descriptions for the hobbits. Great stuff Lindelea.



Author Reply: Ah, thanks!

I've often seen horses standing that way... lovely how it works. Their tails won't reach to their own faces, but with a friend they get complete coverage.

Somehow I don't think animals necessarily would think of names the same way we do... they're much more scent-oriented, and sound-oriented rather than language-oriented, for example. So I try to look at things from a different point of view...

Thanks for taking the time to comment!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/10/2006
Ohhh, I love how Frodo calls him "our Bill". What a lovely scene.

:D

Author Reply: Thanks!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/25/2006
I'm not surprised that Bill is a bit nervous. Who wouldn't be?

And all that horrible squelchiness underfoot - it's a good thing the pony trusts Sam and is beginning to see a distinct difference between Bill Ferny and Strider.

Author Reply: Ponies have sound instincts, as I might have mentioned before, except when they are expressing irrational fears about something or other. They can be the most practical, down-to-earth creatures, and the most head-in-the-clouds-what-were-you-thinking? animals I have ever known.

Thanks!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/24/2006
Well, if I were with the party, this would be a part of the journey that I would have hated, too, and I grew up in the midst of such things.

Author Reply: I always hated walking on marshy ground when we were backpacking or portaging. I don't like wet feet, even now, unless it's because we're swimming or wading on a hot day and I'll get to dry them off when we're done.

Thanks!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/24/2006
Nice to think this one is leaving his "old misery" behind in such a way, and aware this Man is not as was the last.

Author Reply: Yes, it's rather fun to imagine Bill's suspicion turning to grudging acceptance and then appreciation!

If only Strider kept a few apples or sweets in his pockets, the process would go faster.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/24/2006
Aha--wonderful infusion of Bill's thoughts into the bookverse.

Author Reply: Thanks! I like looking at things from varying points of view. (You can either call it "beating the thing to death" or "looking at it in a fresh, new way". *g*)

GamgeeFestReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/23/2006
Ah, poor Bill, yearning for the familiarity of home, even though he knows what it'll bring him. I love his nickname for Pippin, "Mr. Apples and Mischief" indeed.

Author Reply: Sometimes it's more comforting to remain in a rut than to brave the unknown... but Bill is in for some pleasant surprises along with the less pleasant ones.

Thanks!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/23/2006
How fascinating! I never really gave Bill much thought before, but now I'm so happy for him that he's away from a life that was so bitter. I can't wait until he discovers the wonders of Rivendell!

Author Reply: O yes, Rivendell, really a high point in the story, for Bill, anyhow! (Though JRRT was right when he said good times are so difficult to write about at any length.)

Thanks!

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/23/2006
I've only just found this story! I love Bill's musings on the journey and his companions, and his memories of his former life - both with the old man, and with Ferny.

So horses will run back into a burning stable, will they? Hmm ... that gives me an idea ...


Jay

Author Reply: Thanks!

Gives you an idea, eh...? Hmm. Will have to watch for the new story!

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