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| The Early Adventures of Fwo and Unga Bee by cpsings4him | 27 Review(s) |
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| Lily | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/29/2004 |
| Thanks to Hobbnit Lily Baggins I found this truly amazing story. I haven't read something that cute ( UN-CA BEEEEEE!) in a long time. Aw, that was so cute....* imagines Frodo rtying to climb up his " unca"'s legs*. And there is going to be more - great. Lily habby. Author Reply: LOL! Your review really made me smile! Thanks for reading! Oh...and a new chappie is now up! Chapter 3 - "Adventures in Waking" | |
| FantasyFan | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/26/2004 |
| Count me among those who have melted into a puddle of goo over this story. I'll just share a bucket with my daughter, who can't stop walking around saying, "Awwwwwwwww!" After the first chapter, I thought you couldn't top the cute, but of course the only thing cuter than baby Fwo is baby Fwo with a kitten! One thing I love is even though it's all about adorable baby cuteness, Fwo definitely has a personality here: he's going to grow up to be adventuresome and curious and loving and grounded in the Shire. Not to mention adorable. And he'll have loving memories of his Unga Bee - thanks for that. Author Reply: LOL! Yes - nothing ups the cute anty like a baby AND a kitten, huh? Hehe! I'm so glad you liked it. I will keep you (and your daughter) safely in your bucket until such time as you can be molded back together! :) Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments about Fwo having a personality! It REALLY made my day! I was so worried about making him 'flat' and one-dimensional...that's not Frodo at ALL! He was nothing if not multilayered! More coming soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Reviews really do mean a lot to! Blessings! cp | |
| illyria | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/22/2004 |
| Oooo...and I'm purring too! What lovely, fluffy tale! I adore it! It left me with a smile and warm, fuzzy feeling inside. Bless you! Author Reply: Thank you so much! I'm glad it brought warm and fuzzy feelings and a smile to go with them! Your review really means a lot to me - especially after reading your comments on reviews on LJ...it makes it twice as special! Blessings! cp | |
| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/21/2004 |
| I swear, I'm just going to melt into a big gooey puddle! This almost makes me want another one.... almost. (I'll just content myself with your version. ;D ) ~Frodo's look back was also wide eye as he cupped his mouth with his hands and whispered conspiratorially, "Beebee beahw hundwey, Unga Bee!"~ Too cute! You really do have the baby thing down. I need more fluff! Author Reply: QUOTE: "This almost makes me want another one...." LOL! Fwo seems to have that effect on people! One reader's comment, where I posted it on my live journal was, "I think my ovaries just exploded!" - LOL! That little stinker has a way of getting the baby juices flowing, does he not! If more fluff is what you're wanting, come see us at live journal - there are lots of hobbity folk there, plus lots of fluffy stories that never end up on a stories sight, but are wonderful none the less - and in fact, there is a community there devoted specifically to hobbit fluff! You can start at my LJ page, then just explore from there! Hope to see you there soon! Oh...here's the link! http://www.livejournal.com/users/cpsings4him/ Thank you for reading and reviewing! Blessings! cp | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/18/2004 |
| TBC? Hoorah! Very nice descriptions, made me long for "baby days" to return again. Your baby talk rings true and yet is not difficult to read (which takes skill in writing, let me tell you! So many times I'm annoyed rather than charmed by written baby talk!). “Well then, it’s a good thing I’ve got two hands, isn’t it?” Somehow this witticism on Bilbo's part sounds very much in character. Thanks for a pleasant read, just perfect for an insomnia-plagued night. Think I'll go back and give the pillow another chance with this bit of sweetness to chew on. Author Reply: Oh! Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! I really appreciate your comments. I'm so glad you found Fwo's 'baby talk' to have a ring of truth to it. I really struggled over it because I know just what you mean about being annoyed by some attempts at 'baby talk' that I have read. Sometimes you wonder if these folks have ever met a toddler. Also, I'm glad that Bilbo came across sounding in his own witty character. Hope it gave you some pleasant WEE!Fwo! dreams! More to come soon! Blessings! cp | |
| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/17/2004 |
| Oh, *gush!* He's soo sweet! I really love young Frodo stories, but I don't think I've seen any this young. I can just picture him - so adorable. But, you know, it's always the innocent looking ones that get in the most trouble. Can't wait to read more. :-D Author Reply: Wow! Thank you for that sweet review! I too am a lover of very young Frodo stories but found that there were just too few of them out there - and even fewer where, as you said, he's truely just a baby. You are dead on right about the innocent ones finding the most trouble to get into. Hehe - I was proof enough of THAT theory! More coming soon! Stay tuned! Blessings! cp | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/17/2004 |
| I'm so glad you posted this here! I'm still melted into a happy puddle over this incredibly sweet story. “Wub ‘ou.” The toddler said simply never lifting his head from his uncle‘s shoulder. Bilbo hugged the little lad in his arms even closer and pressed another kiss, this time landing it on the sweet softness of Frodo’s little neck, which made him squirm from the tickle just a little bit. “Oh, my sweet lad. Your Uncle Bee loves you, too.” *sigh* Author Reply: Awww! Thank you!! I really apprecite you rec'ing it on LJ...all the reviews I got on it there just made my day! Glad you liked it so much! You have written so many stories that are on my favorites list, it's nice to return the favor a bit! Blessings! cp | |