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| The Early Adventures of Fwo and Unga Bee by cpsings4him | 27 Review(s) |
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| Illyria | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/18/2004 |
| Oh, and I forget to tell you that the end scene, with the towel cocoon and Frodo insisting on staying to be Unga Bee's tatapiwwah, and Bilbo asking him if he really wouldn't want wings of himself, and Bilbo's gentle dream... I love that, very, very much. Author Reply: Awww! I'm glad you liked that fluffy moment! :D | |
| Illyria | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/18/2004 |
| Ooooh, CP, this is simply adorable!!!! I love Frodo's adventures with the butterfly, and Hamson! :) I really enjoyed reading this, CP. Thank you so much! Author Reply: I'm sorry I'm just now getting around to saying, "thank you" so much for the sweet review! I'm so thankful for each one. I know they say that reviews shouldn't matter, and I suppose I would keep writing no matter how few I got, but well, you know they are always welcome and so appreciated. Thank you! *hugs!* | |
| Obelia medusa | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/15/2004 |
| Just when I thought this couldn't get any better... you give us Sleepy Baby Fwo. *dies of happiness* "Frodo lay sleeping on his belly, long dark lashes pressed into his soft, round baby cheeks, flushed pink with deep slumber. At intervals, his rosebud lips, pressed slightly open against the coverlet, worked at the little thumb that had found it's familiar way into his mouth soon after Bilbo had put him down." This is a dangerous story to read in lab; it's so hard to stop myself from squeeing! :-\ Author Reply: Oh! Another sweet review!!!!! Thank you so much! I just LOVE to watch babies sleeping - there's just nothing sweeter! And, when it's a baby Frodo hobbit - even better! :-) Thank you again! By the way, in case you haven't seen it yet, chapter 4 is now up! Blessings! cp | |
| Obelia medusa | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/15/2004 |
| Aaarggggh!!! *keels over from insulin shock* This is too, too precious. :P How do you do baby talk so well?! I can just hear Frodo's baby voice in my mind... And a kitten now! Adorable. *recovers from insulin shock long enough to click on "next chapter"* Author Reply: Oh, no! Another one dead from the baby Fwo sweetness!! Hehe! Thank you so much for your sweet review! QUOTE: How do you do baby talk so well?! Well, Fwo's speech pattern is mainly modeled after a couple of toddlers I have known in my life - namely, Molly and Cody (my husband's cousins' two children). We had lots of fun with them when they were learning to talk! Thank you again for reading and reviewing! :D | |
| bobo baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/24/2004 |
| I think I am on fluff overload! This is way too cute for my own good! I am so glad Shirebound directed me to your stories! They are too precious! Please update soon, I want to know what other mischief Fwo can get into with his Unga Bee! Author Reply: Oh no! Not FLUFF!Overload! Hehe! Shirebound is such a sweetie for reccing my story! Update is coming soon! :-) Thank you for taking the time to review! | |
| Lily | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/12/2004 |
| THANK YOU! This chapter will have me smiling all evening. Author Reply: I'm sorry it's taken me this long to get around to saying THANK YOU for the review! I really do appreciate you taking the time to leave me a comment. More coming soon! :) | |
| Ariel | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/10/2004 |
| I don't know if my blood sugar can take this much sweetness... Don't you know things that are this cute cause angst mavens to go into sugar shock? Quick! Angst me! Stat! Hheheheheeheh. Very nicely done, my dear. Ariel Author Reply: Good grief! I can't believe I'm just NOW getting around to replying to your sweet review of my little fic! I'm very ashamed! Thank you so much for taking the time to review it. Sorry about the sugar overload! Hehe! But what a way to go, huh?!? :-) | |
| FantasyFan | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/10/2004 |
| Baby sleep! Snuggles and Nibbles! More kitten! You must have a list of the fluffiest, sweetest, most puddle-inducing things, and you're going to trot them out, one at a time, for the chapters to this fic. I'm waiting for fingerpaint and a milk-mustache (or whatever you think up - it will be better than that, I'm sure.) My daughter Raven and I are still going around saying, 'Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.' Each of these chapters is a gem, THANK YOU. Author Reply: I'm so ashamed that I'm just now replying to your sweet review of my story! Thank you so much for taking the time to review it...it really does mean a lot to me! I'll have more Fwo and Unga Bee up very soon! :-) | |
| Arwen Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/10/2004 |
| Well, Frodo's quite a smart baby. Perhaps even to smart for his own good...perhaps. Could it be? Author Reply: Oh yes! Definately too smart for his own good! Remember what Primula said about him in the first chapter? "The enormous blue eyes that looked at her were utterly innocent and devoid of malice, but Primula knew her son well enough to know that “no twouba” was not a likely thing. A sweeter, more loving (and loveable) child was not to be found anywhere in the Shire, but Frodo’s bright and curious mind often got him into situations his eighteen and one quarter months of living had not prepared him to deal with." We will see that bright and curious mind get him into some things he's not quite ready for - very soon! Thank you for reading and leaving a review! Blessings! cp | |
| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/9/2004 |
| Oh my gawd! This is just too precious! Every time I see there's been an update for this I get this huge sappy grin that won't go away. (not that I want it to...) Gotta love Fwo's logic and reasoning in this! The mind of that child is just too... too... *gush* I'm just gonna go read it again! Don't take too long for the next one! Nibbles! :D Author Reply: LOL! So happy to have helped to put a huge sappy grin on your face! I am having so much fun writing this! Chapter 4 will be coming soon! Thank you so much for continuing to read! Blessings! cp | |