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| Castle Part 1 and 2 by Timmy2222 | 18 Review(s) |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/21/2004 |
| This is a wonderful story. I love your characterization of Aragorn as indomitable, and the determination and loyalty of both Faramir and Eomer. The Lady Saborian was a credible villian, and most of all, your wonderful OC Vlohiri. I will look forward to your sequel. | |
| TieAillin Alcarion | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/21/2004 |
| GREAT story! I can't wait for the sequel! I'm glad Vlohiri got to go with Aragorn. Smiles, TieAillin | |
| strider's girl | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/19/2004 |
| I decided to answer your questions you put forward in your author reply. I've told my best friend about this story and she says she has been reading it and says its really good. She doesn't really like reviewing so she hasn't left a review. She says its a really descripitive plot and full of excitement and wonderful characters. I do read a lot of LOTR fiction. Mostly based on after the War of the Ring. I like to read people's interprentation of what could befall the characters after the War, and you've done a good job on that! I suppose one of my favourite bits are interaction between Aragorn and Vlohiri. A very interesting friendship has been created. Vlohiri's insistance that Aragorn is a poacher has been quite amusing. I hope to see more in their friendly relationship blossom in the coming chapters! Hope to see more soon from you. | |
| TieAillin Alcarion | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/16/2004 |
| GREAT story! I can really see Aragorn and the other characters. Fully in character for him. I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope the website starts functioning fully soon. I only see a few spots where I can see a bit of difference in your use of language. There are a few times where I know German uses the present tense of the verb, but English uses a different tense, but it doesn't obscure the meaning. Waiting for more, TieAillin | |
| striders girl | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/16/2004 |
| I love this story! This is one of the best pieces of LOTR fiction I've ever read! THe characters and plot are unique and different. Everything surprises me at every turn! I hope to read more soon! A thrilling epic is in the works! Author Reply: Hi Striders Girl, thanks for the review! There truly is more to come since three chapters are already stored... Have you got a favorite scene yet - or would you like to wait and tell me when you will have read the end? Take care, Timmy | |
| bumper | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/2/2004 |
| great story, and so well written. Can not wait for more. Love the converasation between Aragorn and the boy. Also love how Aragorn fights them with all he has. looking forward to more | |
| striders girl | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/30/2004 |
| This is A BRILLIENT STORY SO FAR. I AM ENTRANTED BY IT. I LOVE IT! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE WITH IT. I'M WONDERING IS THIS STORY ON FANFICTION.NET? IF IT IS COULD YOU TELL ME WHERE IT IS AND WHAT YOUR PENNAME IS? IF NOT DON'T WORRY ABOUT IT. I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT PART OF THIS STORY! KEEP ON WRITING! | |
| Éile igen Briain | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/29/2004 |
| Wow! Great start. While you do have some grammer problems, the plot is good and the characters enaging. I'm also enjoying your original characters. So far they have been as interesting as our 'usual cast members.' :) Great job! Your story line is something I haven't seen before, which is always a good thing! I look forward to seeing where you go with it. | |