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The Cursed Queen of Angmar  by khazar-khum 54 Review(s)
Everything ElfReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 1/6/2020
omg this was amazing!!More more more

vntqj9w4Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/26/2015
Well, it was published in the news that Hillary was sinnedg $45 million to Al Qaeda in Libya, so you tell me, why she would say that if it wasn't true? The rumor about the consulate was false, because there was no consulate in that Town in Libya and that is confirmed from many different sources including the gov list of such facilities in Libya. It was an office of the CIA there to train and manage the liberals and 16 of them left after the ambassador begged for more security. It definitely was not the Gadaffi group that did it, it was the same group that took out Gadaffi becuase they sodomized him as well as the ambassador and only khazars do that as a ritualistic practice to their faith which is phallic worshipping. You do know they are pagans, right? They are not practicing Jews.

RedheredhReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 3/2/2005
I am so sad. I started reading this story only a short time ago and now that I am caught up with the chapters and the story itself... it comes to an end!! *nnnh*! I was hoping you would tell us how Ariashal came to be encased in her enchanted crypt. Or would the better description be 'magical cocoon'? Anyway, thank you for a great story. I am slowly working my way through the rest of your archived stories and enjoying them very much. Oh, if only I were anything like a *good* reader and reviewed as often as I should!

ArielReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 3/1/2005
Epilogue! Wow! It's over! *pout* Oh, but I'll bet you aren't unhappy about that. LOL! Thank you for a thoroughly enjoyable tale.

ArielReviewed Chapter: 50 on 3/1/2005
I am glad you are still updating this story here. It is still as entertaining as ever even though it seems that few are dedicated enough to follow it. You may not need my praise, but I read here most often and am glad to have the story somewhere I am not likely to miss a new chapter.

ArielReviewed Chapter: 48 on 8/29/2004

For some reason, I didn't get this alert, but I figured you must have updated by now so I came to look and voila! Sweet chapter - I have a vision of Arishal and her king holding each other in her cart on the long trip back – very nice. I am surprised there have been no other reviews to this chapter. When was it posted? You seem to have the same issue with this slowly updated piece that I have with mine – without reminders, only those who are truly into the story seek out updates.

A couple of typos you might want to fix.

“It was your skills that saved her, not simply her strength,” said Herumor “ I would have been unable to stanch the flow of blood, let along heal her lung.”

Should be 'alone' instead of 'along'?

“Neglected them? Nay, you have given them a far better education than most men, and even fewer kings treat their sons as well as you do. You have nothing to fear in regards to your children.” “Still. It will be good when they can see their mother and I again. The Queen sorely misses them.”

Missing hard return between the quote marks.

Thanks again for updating and hopefully I will get the alert next time!


LossenchristalReviewed Chapter: 47 on 5/29/2004
Wow! I just read the whole thing! I never thought I would actually like the Witch-King!:) But I do!:/ Very interesting story! Keep up the good work!:)

Music2084Reviewed Chapter: 47 on 4/21/2004
Wow! I just read the whole thing. It was greattttttt. I really enjoyed reading it. Chapter 47 has a happy ending. Does that mean the story has ended? ...i hope not.

Author Reply: No, not yet--I'm just up to my eyeballs with the Mithril Awards.

BrigitReviewed Chapter: 47 on 4/7/2004
I've read the whole story! I love how Ariashal is more than a brainless MS. You make her and her husband realistic.

BTW, I figured out who the Witch-King was! The only childless queen of Numenor was the one before Tar-Minastir. Minastir's father was named Isilmo. Am I right?! *jumps up and down* Am I right?

Author Reply: Yes.

There are a couple of theories about him; the Isilmo one works best, IMHO.

ArielReviewed Chapter: 47 on 3/31/2004
Oh, that was nicely done. Well handled action and compelling storyline. I was glad Ariashal got to see her husband's face, even if it took her own near death to do it. I get the feeling she considers it worth the price.

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