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| Shadow by fael bain | 52 Review(s) |
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| Earthdragon | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 10/27/2020 |
| Re your footnote to Chapter 13, Oropher, his family and people left Doriath as refugees and survivors of the raid by the kin-slayers. They found sanctuary in The Greenwood and the Silvan accepted Oropher as leader. They didn't 'fall out' with the Lorien elves, who had their own rulers - Amdir followed by his son, Amroth. Celeborn and Galadriel only took over as rulers of Lothlorien after the deaths of Amdir and Amroth. | |
| Karen | Reviewed Chapter: 61 on 7/3/2006 |
| This story is just fantastic! I love the characterization you've given all the characters from canon, and I like the original characters as well. So was the "young one" of the last chapter Esendri? I'm going to be a coward and wait until the next part is finished before starting it. I really enjoy your writing style. The only thing I've noticed is that sometimes you seem to rephrase a sentence halfway through without getting rid of the last half, or some words get skipped over. Anyway, I hope you keep up the good work. | |
| Nessa | Reviewed Chapter: 61 on 5/26/2006 |
| Hello. I love to read,and I'm an avid fan of Tolkien writings.The stories of Arda is one of my favorite places to read from. I dont usually leave reviews,but,I just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this story. I would much appreciate it if you would send me an e-mail as to when you have part two,and three to this story.You left me on the edge.*smile*.My name is Linda,and I go by Nessa most places.My e-mail addy is riversheelf@prtcnet.com Thank you for the great story,and I look forward to the other two.Great job! Hannon le,mellon nin! Ná Elbereth veria le, ná elenath dín síla erin rád o chuil lín. | |
| Lyn | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 3/29/2006 |
| I admire your ability to weave a complicated story line. Just one suggestion: "All I see is two friends, one right before me, whom I cannot abandon, and other, lost. Possibly could be improved: "All I see are two friends; one right before me whom I cannot abandon, and another, lost." | |
| Lyn | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 3/29/2006 |
| As always, an excellent story. Just one suggestion: It was then that she noted that she was a strange cloak wrapped around her. Missing something...perhaps, "It was then she noted she had a strange cloak wrapped around her" or "It was then she noted a strange cloak was wrapped around her" | |
| Luna | Reviewed Chapter: 56 on 1/29/2005 |
| Great great great!! I can't wait till the next chapter...what's with Unievil??? Author Reply: Thanks, Luna. Hopefully, the next chapter will be up within the week! | |
| loopy | Reviewed Chapter: 55 on 1/5/2005 |
| Still enjoying this -- though I wonder if the light-heartedness will return? Author Reply: Hiya, glad to see that you still like it! While the story gets darker, I think you'll enjoy the next chapter quite a bit! =) x | |
| Elven_lady14 | Reviewed Chapter: 28 on 11/20/2004 |
| Why is Legolas Calling Lord Elrond Ada? Author Reply: Hi and thanks for reviewing again! It's part of the story, which will be explained later! Once again, I apologise for removing all the later chapters, but I PROMISE that it'll be a million times better once I've finished re-writing them, hopefully by the end of the year! x | |
| Elven_lady14 | Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 11/20/2004 |
| Whats with the whole Yoda talk thing? ou are saying thiongs like, Served me well have you, and its driving me NUTZ! Author Reply: Really sorry about that, it's part of the reason why I'm re-writing it! I've removed the older, bad chapters so that it's not as messy, and confusing! My new material has only gone up to Chapter 16 now, and I promise there's not a single Yoda-esque phrase there! =) x | |
| Elf messenger | Reviewed Chapter: 53 on 9/15/2004 |
| Home sweet home. Back in Lasgalen. Elrohir must have a sign on his back that says "Yell at me". I hope he cools off;). Can't wait for your next chapter! Namarie. Elf messenger Author Reply: Sometimes we tend to take the ones who care for us for granted and ill-treat them without realising it. Obviously Elrohir is one of those, and I seriously do admire his patience! =) Meanwhile, Lasgalen should provide plenty of excitement for our favourite Elves. x | |