Reviews (98)

mystarlight · 27 August 2018 · Chapter 0: Prologue

I started to read your story and really enjoy it. Thank you for writing and sharing. Hopefully you will update it one day.

Larner · 3 April 2010 · Chapter 28: We Come to It At Last

It had to be the most painful experience yet, to learn how much of her memory had been stripped from her!

cathleen · 25 March 2010 · Chapter 28: We Come to It At Last

Wow!

Elflingimp · 24 March 2010 · Chapter 28: We Come to It At Last

Well all the pieces are falling into place I see, very good. I still have questions like are they going back to Valinor and resuming their old lives or has everything changed so much that all of that is lost forever? I have more but I think I will wait to see how you tie up all the loose ends. Hugs The Imp P.S. I have loved this story from beginning to end(or almost end I think)

Larner · 21 February 2010 · Chapter 27: Passing Shadows

Aha--the mechanisms of false memories begin to unravel as they are put to the test! Now--to see how they will fare once the protagonists come to the Undying Lands!

Elflingimp · 17 February 2010 · Chapter 27: Passing Shadows

Well thankyou for a new chapter stranger! I still cannot figure out how all this will end but I guess thats in your department. It seems everybody is remembering something and it makes it more mysterious than ever.Hope you write another chapter in the not to didtant future and your muse doesn't leave you again, I love this story! Hugs The Imp

Larner · 18 September 2009 · Chapter 26: The Paradox

Yes--he now has every reason to live. Poor Elamdir--knowing his carelessness cost the life of Glorfindel! And trying to appreciate the choice of Arwen and the fate of Men will be difficult, I fear. But if Elamdir and Elladan's wife live, it will be marvelous!

Elflingimp · 17 September 2009 · Chapter 26: The Paradox

WOW! That's all I can say, that was one of the best chapters! I was wondering how things were going to play out, still can't see to all ends. I have to find my box of kleenex now. Walks off muttering.... Hugs The Imp P.S. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Larner · 31 August 2009 · Chapter 25: New Beginnings

A wonderful scene of happiness achieved, even if there will be great grief to temper it! Lovely, Alassante.

Larner · 1 June 2009 · Chapter 24: Choices

I can certainly appreciate the feeling of violation she knows--poor girl! But at last his heart is at peace, and they shall know joy in one another as is right and proper for the two of them! And in a year, their child shall be born! Delightful!

Roche Reyes · 6 April 2009 · Chapter 22: Reflections

I was captivated by the story...I wanted to finish it faster...i enjoyed reading it...i wish to be informed when the story continues...thank you for making me escape reality and enter a world of adventure and romance...

Larner · 26 January 2009 · Chapter 23: Trust

Grief, after all, is as much a part of life as is joy. It is not an easy thing to think of, the death to come of a child and a brother's wife. But without risking the loss, one cannot know the attendant joy.

pipinhert · 24 January 2009 · Chapter 23: Trust

very nice... Poor Laureanna, here she beilieves her children will die, and thinks it is best not to have children. Elladna finds love, but will her be cursed to loose her. Here you have Elrond knowing the fate his children may bear, that must be a curse to him. Is thier any way that they can alter thier futures... Very nice...

pipinheart · 13 January 2009 · Chapter 22: Reflections

Nice.... You feel for Laureanne, she has met new friends and gladriel has asked her to look in the mirror. i wonder who is the blonde boy who looks at her intently and doesn't move and does she loose some of her children, it makes you wonder if she saves the past only to loose what is important to her for some reason.... Very nice....Update soon...

Larner · 13 January 2009 · Chapter 22: Reflections

Definitely a distressing vision for her. And the loss of memories would be most distressing indeed!

pipinheart · 19 December 2008 · Chapter 22: Namárië

Very Lovely... Laureanna sure seems to need help and it is good that Elrond was sent to aid her. They are all parting, but it does make sense that Legolas and Laureanna will loose thier memories for a time. Since she has slipped up it could cause problems. At Least her parents seem to be getting together.... Nice read, continue soon...

ellie · 7 December 2008 · Chapter 22: Namárië

*spoilers* I'm so glad they got back to Imladris. I'm glad Elrohir is going to stay with her too, the little rat for even thinking about not staying with her! Glad the Valar will be altering memories so Leggy will have an earier time of things away from her and glad that Elrond now knows the truth . That will be a great help to her. It was delightful to see that Glorfy is with Indil now - paying her "lipservice" if nothing else (hahahahaha!) Can't wait for the next chapter!

Larner · 5 December 2008 · Chapter 22: Namárië

So very gentle a chapter as they each begin to find the peace they need, and Elrond learns the truth of his new daughter. How difficult this knowledge must be for him. Well done.

pipinheart · 1 November 2008 · Chapter 20: Drawn Together

Poor, laureanna. Her parents are together, but glorfindel is hiding himself away from her, because Elladan is charming her. I am sure they will find a way to each other, but poor Laureann is so anxious... Please continue....

Larner · 30 October 2008 · Chapter 20: Drawn Together

Ah--it appears EVERYONE is seeking to interfere! Poor Laureanna has no idea she's not alone in this at the moment, and Glorfindel's own heart is being stirred as we speak! Heh!

Larner · 31 August 2008 · Chapter 19: In the Places That You Hide

At least Galadriel knows who is her father, even if she is unsure of the circumstances. And to see the might-have-been in Laureanna's heart must have been quite the shocker. And Elrohir is becoming willing to postpone knowing the truth--for now, at least. That is good in this case. Perhaps the day will come when all will know. Now if this Elrohir will follow THAT Glorfindel's command to help anchor Laureanna to this reality. It is indeed a paradox!

pipinheart · 31 August 2008 · Chapter 19: In the Places That You Hide

Very nice... You feel here for Laureanna as she is to meet Elrohir's family and her father as well. Galadriel knows something, but not all of it, its interesting she could read that Glorfindel is her father. And she mumbled goodnight Ada to Glorfindel, did he hear that I wonder. Will Elrohir take his grandmothers advice and let Laureanna have her secrets for now... Very nice... update soon...

pipinheart · 19 July 2008 · Chapter 18: Return to Me

Very nice...Laureaana has found Elrohir, but he wants to know what secret she holds... I feel for her. And Glorfindel, is haunted by dreams, I wonder will this help him find the one he loves... Very lovely...

Larner · 3 July 2008 · Chapter 18: Return to Me

Seems as if Manwe himself is the only one not inclined to play matchmaker between Glorfindel and Indil--even Eru is apparently involved--and their daughter has her own intentions! Nice!

pipinheart · 16 June 2008 · Chapter 17: Unbreakable

Very nice... Finally we see Elrohir and Laureanna bond in both times, nice work there. You can see how much they love each other. But both of them being seperated is hard, and now she sees that one of them is hurt and believes one to be dying or already dead. Very good... Update soon...