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The Price of Freedom  by erin lasgalen 41 Review(s)
aprilReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/8/2004
I love it!!! Please update soon.

aprilReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/30/2003
Amazing story. I can't wait how it ends!!! Please continue it soon. Love it :-)

EmgeeReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/17/2003
This story has caught me, and now I'm just on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. I love how you depict Eowyn and Legolas together, and your style is flawless and rich. I do hope for a happy ending!

EmgeeReviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/17/2003

AMReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/27/2003
This story is incredible. Waiting, very impatiently and with joyous anticipation, for the next chapter.

...Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/18/2003
This is looking really good. I'm glad to see a well written Eyown finally coming to the fore. Please continue!

IceAngelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/7/2003
Hello, this is IceAngel from AmonSul
Thanks for uploading the new chapter, I look forward to reading it. Usually I'll be able to find the updates myself so you guys don't have to send them to me each time, but if you see that I havn't upated, just let me know like you did for this chapter, or through the forum which I check daily.
http://pub15.bravenet.com/forum/fetch.php?usernum=1232447165&msgid=136474&mode=&cp=
Good writing!
IceAngel

NymeriaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/6/2003
Hi!

I really like what you've written so far. The chapters are nice and long and very well written. The fact that it is a AU doesn't spoil anything and we can't take anything we know from cannon for granted.

I hope you will update soon, you left us with a nasty cliffhanger. Alright so it wasn't exactly a cliffhanger, but still I can't wait to read the next chapter :)

Happy writing!

The KarenatorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/5/2003
erin,
This is quite an interesting story. It took a wide turn I didn't expect when I read the first chapter. Of course, I realized it was AU, but I didn't realize that Eowyn would become the mother of an Amazon tribe! (I mean that in the best possible way!) You have created some incredible OC's with very realistic personalities. The entire plot is well thought out and put to paper in a concise and well written manner. The dark haired elf of the Hunters was a strangly captivating character and wholly frightening. The battle scene and the confusion of who was who was very well done. I think war scenes are hard to write and you put on a good show! Well, now that Gimli and Legolas are back in the story...a little worse for the wear...it should liven things up...as though they were dull to start with. I look forward to seeing where you take this. :>) Karen

TolkienFanReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/4/2003
Hi Erin,

I don't have time to read your story yet, but it looks very intriguing.

However, I thought you might like to know about the typo I spotted in your story description: "guilded" should be "gilded", assuming you mean overlaid with gold.

Hope to check back with some useful feedback, but probably not until next week.

- Barbara

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