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The Price of Freedom  by erin lasgalen 41 Review(s)
MollyReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/29/2004
I've been watching for this for months and I was thrilled to see it arrive today. I love the way you portray Legolas and Eowyn's relationship and how they can't get enough of each other. And I was so proud of Legolas when he said "she belongs to herself." Even if they are doomed to be separated after death, that's no reason to not love each other while they have the time--like Thranduil says. It was a surprise to see him, but I'm glad he showed up. He obviously loves his son and respects Eowyn, and he can only help matters. This latest battle was harrowing--I can't imagine what the final one will be like! I'm on pins and needles. I hope most of the main characters live through it, although I know the fight will be anything but easy. I'm eagerly anticipating the last chapter!

AMReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/14/2004
Please, please, please finish this!

GwennethReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/28/2004
I've just spent the last few hours reading this story. What an incredible tale you have weaved! Your original characters are very three dimentional and realistic and you have kept Tolkien's characters very true. I almost cried when I discovered that the story was not finished. I hope that you will be updating it soon because I'm dying to read the final chapter! I must know what happens to Eowyn and Legolas!

Wonderful work. Please continue to write, you are very talented.

EllaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/27/2004
This is one of the most interesting and exciting AU-type fics I've ever read. And the E/L pairing is so enticing here. Please, please update soon. :)

LisaBReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/3/2004
Ahh! Beautifully done! At first I wasn't too sure about the pairing, but at usual you have pulled it off effortlessly. I'm sure the course of this true love will not run smooth from here. Now the angsty wait for Chapter Five. (Hmmmm, why do I get this feeling that I've done this before?)

LisaBReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/3/2004
Just a quick note to tell you I'm enjoying your story. I'm a fan of your DBZ works and was thrilled to find this. It was a bit slow to get into, but that may also be the learning curve of the fandom (I only know the movies). Once it gets going, however, it drags you in and keeps you there. Brava!

I noticed quite a few mistakes (typos, homonyms, etc.) Do you need a beta for this story? I would be pleased to help if you do. I've left me email if you need one.

RianaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/11/2004
I fell in love with your DBZ fics, and I have found your LOTR fics even more endearing. You wrote Legolas and Eowyn true to form and in prose that leaves me breathless for the next chapter.

OctaviaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/22/2004
Oh, I'm so glad to see the next chapter is up! This is a wonderful story, and though the pairing is not one I would usually go for, it's beautifully done. I don't like the thought of Legolas having to die for being in love with a mortal though. After all, of the three canon Elf/mortal couples, two (Beren and Luthien, and Aragorn and Arwen) ended quite miserably. But in the third (Idril and Tuor), the mortal went off to life everlasting with the Elf. I don't suppose that you're planning on evening up the score?

And I really love what you've done with Eowyn. She was always my favourite from the LOTR universe, and it's nice to see something that really focuses on her for once. I think she needs to apologise to her poor brother though, for running off and letting him think that she's dead!

AMReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/19/2004
Absolutely marvelous! I'm so glad that they're together. Waiting for the final (happy I hope) resolution.

unplugged32Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/11/2004
stunning! breathtaking!! beautifully written!! more please???

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