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Free Fall  by Lindorien 52 Review(s)
Kitt of LindonReviewed Chapter: 21 on 2/27/2004
What Boromir said here is so true.

“Allow him to go off on a journey of unknown duration, into unknown peril to accomplish an unknown purpose?” Boromir laughed, “If you had ever had a little brother, Aragorn, then you would never have asked that question.”

I have many little brothers myself, thus I can relate to that.
I really like the discription of Galadriel's offering to Boromir. I was trying to imagine what it was like, but it is so hard to put into words. So that was very skilled.

Author Reply:

I've seen lots of reasons for why Boromir went instead of Faramir. For me, it boiled down to the most basic of reasons.

What could Galadriel offer that would make Boromir depart so from his typical path? Most people do some variation of the ring itself, but Boromir intimated in FOTR that she offered something she did not have the power to give. I tried to think what could be so important, so dear to the heart of the man that he could be turned from the path. Then the chapter wrote itself.

I'm am so glad you like this, Kitt. Sorry, I am so long in my reply.

Lindorien


Kitt of LindonReviewed Chapter: 17 on 2/26/2004
Just had to leave a review.

“Peace, Brother. You will get your chance. Do not mourn me until there is reason to do so. Watch for me, Faramir. For one day, I will ride back on the evening breeze, and the Tower Guard will say to you, ‘Look! The Lord of Gondor has returned!’”

That is so sad! What a poignant way to end a chapter. What a good guy Boromir is, and reading things like this makes one realize how not such a bad guy he was and how much the Ring corrupted him.
(Hey, I like Boromir, maybe because of his noble heart. My family thinks I'm odd, for he's the one that tried to take the Ring, but how can you not help but love him?)
I'm planning on reading the rest tomorrow and looking forward to it.


Author Reply:

I think Boromir was a good guy. Obviously. The heart is a complex thing. My personal take is that Boromir never had a chance and that Galadriel nudged Boromir in the wrong direction for her own purposes. Its difficult to say, but the whole experience in Lorien was quite unlike Boromir's experience in Imladris from my interpretation. That coupled with Faramir's comments regarding the Lady of the Golden Wood and Boromir's own comments.

It really is too bad.

Lindorien


Kitt of LindonReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/26/2004
Through every chapter I see deeper and deeper into Boromir and Faramir's bond. You write the relationships of their family in such a vivid way. It was so sad about Finduilas' death and I feel so sad for Faramir who later shall loose brother and father.

Author Reply:

I feel compelled with everybody who comments to me about this story to explain that exactly HOW Finduilas' died is not at all clear. I read the passage in the appendix to mean that she suicided. Others read it differently, but I do think, my interpretation helps to explain a little of the family dynamics. The details surrounding the suicide are likewise pure poetic license.

I like to think the brother's had a very close bond. It is not painted that way in the books. Boromir never mentioned Faramir but once, in passing, in all of FOTR. He does not even mention him when he's dying. Faramir speaks more of him, and appears to be grieving, yet also seems a little more distant than I would expect. However, in a work as large as Tolkiens that tends to concentrate more heavily on history and actual story rather than on the complex relationships, much must be left by the side of the road. So it made me happy to think of these two as being two sides of the same coin and intimately connected one to the other.

Lindorien


Kitt of LindonReviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/26/2004
Heh, so Elves gave Boromir nightmares for weeks? Funny at the insight that they made him feel grimy. No wonders, then, he did not want to go into Lothlorien. Hmm, so how did he feel about Imladris and having Legolas as company for weeks? Owe, plot bunny just bit my nose.
Ah, well, to the next chapter...

Author Reply:

When Sam and Frodo meet up with Faramir in Ithilien, Faramir did not speak highly of Galadriel. I had the impression that there was a basic tension there, a basic mistrust, awe perhaps. Faramir seemed to think that Galadriel might have had a negative effect upon his brother.

Boromir, after having spent months in the House of Elrond and traveling with Legolas was still loath to enter the wood of Lothlorien. For whatever reason, he was ill-equipped to handle that meeting with Galadriel.

It's a presumption, but because of their proximity, I had to wonder if there wasn't some historical unpleasantness between the two realms - Gondor and Lothlorien. Or perhaps its just the memory of Isildur and the Last Alliance still reverberating across the millenia. But Boromir? No, they made him nervous and awed him. Hard to tell about Faramir - but I'd wager that he likewise gave the Elves a wide berth.

Lindorien


Kitt of LindonReviewed Chapter: 14 on 2/26/2004
It was sort of odd to see the poem here, for I was just thinking about it but alas, could not remember the ending verses. Glad to have my memory refreshed. (I was going to look it up but I dislike taking my copy of The Fellowship of the Ring out of its box set thing, for it is so hard to take it out. But I like the box too much not to keep them in.)
Anyway, I will get onto reading the next chapters later - but so far, so good.
‘“It had wings,” Faramir breathed. “It had wings and it flew at us, forced us to the ground.”'
That description put a very vivid and terrifying image in my mind. Like I said, very good so far.


Author Reply:

Wow! It is so cool when somebody wanders by and blows the dust off of an older fic and then enjoys it. Sort of like finding some book published in the fifties and then saying, "Hey! I like this!"

I hope you continue to like this. It is one of my first fanfics, so it holds a special place in my heart. Rereading it now, however, I can see places where I might consider tweaking. Perhaps I will sometime.

Thanks for reading and do let me know your impressions as you continue.

Lindorien


Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/1/2004
Much of interest here. I shall read it again before next I sit myself down to read the trilogy. That is my usual January/February event each year, so this is indeed timely.

I did enjoy your story, even the large bump to my psyche! Thou hast given to me a new appreciation of these frail mortals.

Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil

Author Reply: As you've no doubt noticed, I could have gone on and on in these Author's Notes. The question is when to say -- Okay, that's enough explanation! Let's see, fic is 33k words, Author's notes are 50k words! hmm...what's wrong with this picture?

I do have a bit of a different take on things. For example, I see Boromir as having a very dry sense of humor -- based on his comments on Caradhras (the "Do you think NOW would be a good time for a fire, Wizard Man?" question). But I've never met anybody else who reads that passage as humorous. Sometimes, its all a matter of inflection. But we all bring something different to the table when we read a storty. Thanks you for you very kind words and thoughtful reviews. It is ever appreciated. Lindorien

Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 25 on 1/1/2004
"If we speak of him carefully it is because we saw mirrored in your brother's weakness regarding the Ring the reflection of our own temptation, for none of us was immune. None of us. Even now it is a bitter pill for each of us to swallow to recognize in your brother our own frailties." What do you think the temptations of Legolas would have been with the ring? Here or in an email, I'd be curious to hear. *elf carefully rushes to assure human that this is genuine interest and not an antagonistic question!*

I like this chapter. (And, no it is not because it has the elf in it. Although, I was getting lonely.) Aragorn and Eowyn are both nicely drawn. Sorry, sweets, the elf is still a bit awkward! Thy impairment doth diminish however.

I cracked up over Eowyn's constant beating back of the roving hands of the Steward!

Well done, Fair One! I shall proceed to yet another of thy stories.

Author Reply: Legolas was from a realm under perpetual siege. Yet he was a happy soul, at least that is the picture I have of him from the books. PJ draws a darker individual. There is so little of Legolas in the story. Sometimes I think that Tolkien threw him in as an afterthought, suddenly thinking "Oh dear, I forgot an Elf! I better send along an Elf! Now who can I send?"

Since the Ring was considered so dangerous that the wisest of the wise feared to touch it or even look upon it, I have to consider the reality that to Legolas, Prince of a realm besieged, it might have crossed his mind more than once that perhaps the Ring could be used to help his father. This is not to say that he in any way acted upon it or even allowed those thoughts time to nest. But I would find it hard to believe that those ideas didn't at least cross his mind. Certainly Galadriel fought something of her own demon with this -- although she already had a ring of power, so she knew what it was to wield one.
Let's talk more in email about this. It is an interesting subject.
Eowyn and Faramir -- they are a cute couple (although I tremeble to use the word 'cute' for the Steward of Gondor and the chick who kicked Witch-King butt).
Give me a hand with my handle on the Elf? I'll edit if it seems a good idea. I made the Elf awkward. I made Faramir awkward. I made everybody awkward. Here's the reason: here we have a bunch of guys standing before the brother of a member of their fellowship who's death, while noble, resulted, possibly, from an ignoble action. Yet the brother is a worthy man. As was he who died. This is the first day of meetings between Faramir and Aragorn, Legolas and Gimli -- all that was going on that day...the mind boggles. The Fellowship had each other. Faramir was alone. He was in Free Fall. The Fellowship stepped in, hoping to slow that descent, not certain if that help would be appreciated. Awkward would be the best description for these relationships.

I am really happy you enjoyed this story and it touched you. Lindorien

Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 24 on 1/1/2004
Oh, nooooooooooo! I was enough of a pile of mush after finding the poetry. Then, a letter. You are heartless yourself in how you wring thy reader's heart!

Isn't this what war does to us? Leaves us mourning the shells left behind by those who die?

Dottir

Author Reply: Yes. That is exactly what war does.

It stinks.

Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 23 on 1/1/2004
"Above the pain his father lingered, coaxing him with gentle words. "We will go beyond the circles of this world, my son. We shall go together."

"Faramir fell towards him, floating ever downward, groping for the touch denied, crying for the lost years, the child seeking his parent though it be among the flames."

How very chilling. I must admit that you are readjusting my perspective on many things in this story. Whether this be for good or ill, I know not yet, wench! (Wench? I fear I am hanging out with mortals too much. Galadriel would not approve of "wench". Of this, I am sure. Celeborn might.)

Humble Scribe, etc.

Author Reply: A writer always likes to know her work has had some effect. I am humbled by your comments.

I can only imagine how desolate Faramir must have felt. And likewise his father, to contemplate and carry out such an act. Surely both felt there was nowhere else to go. When he woke, Faramir was alone.

Lindorien

Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 21 on 1/1/2004
"Even a soldier can grow weary of killing and of strife and has need to rest from his labors.

Boromir found himself sinking into this vision. The Lady offered him hope and a happy future; a life without despair, without fear, without doubt."

It is a sign of powerful writing that it stirs sometimes an unexpected and visceral reaction in a reader. I did not expect that quite, but you have achieved it. I have been given a new perspective on something long familiar. For this, I thank you.

Why did a good man hold out his fingers and grasp for the ring? Why did Galadriel seem to him to dangle it before his eyes? Was he selfish? Was she? Did he see only what was happening to his own people? Did she? Did he know or care what others brought to this quest? That Gondor was not alone in what it suffered and risked to do this task? Many, many questions.

"I do not know what is in the heart of the Elf and the Dwarf, yet here is where they must make their decisions to go further, or to return to their homes."

"We have fought a lonely battle, Aragorn, son of Arathorn. Do you not understand how desperate is our situation in Gondor?"

And elsewhere. The evil of Sauron in devising too many "lonely battles"?

You are making me really think about such things. Not always a comfortable thing to do, but necessary.

You are quite some writer, my lady.


Author Reply: Something that has always struck me about LOTR was the 'loneliness' of her peoples. I had the impression that Legolas had never been to Lothlorien, yet it is quite close to Mirkwood. That seems almost impossible for a 3,000 year old being. Also, he and the Lothlorien elves seemed unfamiliar with each other and with each other languages. The dwarves were off doing their own thing. The hobbits were insulated. Aragorn was almost 90 years old and had traveled far and wide across this land and yet, he seemed singularly uninformed with what happened in Rohan or Gondor, this despite having spent years among them in contact with the highest of personages there. Gandalf had been in Middle Earth for a thousand years and seemed to have small knowledge of what transpired across his responsibility. It does not seem possible that all could have been so out of touch with each other. My impression was always of a great curtain drawn between all these different entities.

To me the Fellowship was very much comprised of a bunch of individuals. Gimli and the hobbits had a connection. Gandalf was connected to the hobbits. Aragorn was connected to Gandalf and had dealings with the elves, although there is no evidence that he knew Legolas prior to Elrond's Council . The odd many out was -- Boromir.

Galadriel was 8,000 years old and a Seer and Ringbearer. Surely her view on things was 'long' if nothing else. I know not if standard 'human' type definitions of 'right' and 'wrong' can apply in this case. I think, if nothing else, perhaps Galadriel saw a means to an end in Boromir. Boromir certainly had his choices. He chose badly. But perhaps the choice offered was more than mortal man could make.

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