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Elf Academy 3: The Enemy Within  by Fiondil 13 Review(s)
UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 65 on 8/11/2014
Poor Alex. We get a harrowing story; think he feels better and then we get screams again. Great psychological profiling. Thanks.

Author Reply: A very harrowing story and we haven't heard the full of it yet, though we will. I'm glad you liked the psychological profiling. Thanks for letting me know and for reviewing. I appreciate both.

LaerReviewed Chapter: 65 on 8/11/2014
Again I must say, Poor Alex. He has been through so very much and seems to be coming apart at the seams. Good thing he has so many who care for him. Hopefully all will be well with them all and Derek (along with the others) will return home. :)

Author Reply: Hi Laer. It's a good thing Alex does have all these people who care for him or else I suspect he'd be a basket case by now. We'll see how things go from here.

Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it.

SunnyReviewed Chapter: 65 on 8/11/2014
Clearly there are quite a lot of stuff floating upwards from the very muddy depths of Alex' subconscious. And the mind can make some very odd connections at times - you have showed that often enough in your fics featuring newly Reborn Elves.
Certainly the first time Alex killed someone would have been a very memorable occasion - and not in a good way.
Cliffy time again, I see. *puts out plates of homemade biscotti on the table of the Cliff House, and starts brewing a fresh pot of tea* I guess Edhellond is going to get as ... interesting ... as Lórien when it was full of the newly Reborn.

Author Reply: Hi Sunny. That's for darn sure and we're only seeing the tip of the iceberg here, I'm afraid. We'll see what all the screaming is about shortly. Thanks for leaving a review. I appreciate it very much.

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