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Elf Academy 3: The Enemy Within  by Fiondil 13 Review(s)
rikkiReviewed Chapter: 59 on 7/21/2014
Ah, Saturday mornings. Loved the tai chi practice between Alex and Finlay. A great way to start the morning. Then the council meeting. That had many various tie-ins to the story and the development of the SCA in Wiseman is going to be interesting as it develops. Even though Alex says he is not interested in joining, I think he may change his mind in the future. Then class with Val teaching. All of this has a very easy feel to it.

Yeah! The non-date is still on between Alex and Felicity. Her revelation about her Army father shows that she would be more receptive of Alex's past if they ever get that far in the non-dating arena. I think Alex is more smitten than he is letting on. Especially when he and Glorfindel face off about being protected while Alex has his evening with Felicity. He surely doesn't want to feel like he is being babysat while he goes to the concert. Maybe walking in the woods will cool off the anger and Alex can think of something that will satisfy everyone about being protected from Farrell. And then the cliff hanger! Ack! You haven't done that for a while and now it is a wait see until Friday to find out if Alex is just expressing his frustrations or if something has happened to him. I think I am going to go join the crowd at the Cliff House and discuss scenarios. Have a good week!

Author Reply: Hi rikki. Yes, it all has a very easy feel to it, until Alex and Glorfindel come to loggerheads over his non-date with Felicity. We'll see how things go with him and Felicity in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it. Have a good week yourself!

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 59 on 7/21/2014
Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear! *checks to make sure cliff house is not teetering on the brink*

Very nice chapter, moving things forward on several fronts--and then wham! Hope my fingernails last till Friday...

Author Reply: I'm sure you'll survive until Friday, Dreamflower. *grin* At any rate, things are moving forward indeed and we'll see how everything progresses as the story unfolds. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much.

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 59 on 7/21/2014
Well,I climbed the cliff in record time this am! You must love making us sweat to put that ending on a Monday chapter so we have to wait an extra day. Whining over. Great chapter. I had forgotten the council meeting and the announcement about the brothers. Going to the history department makes sense. Thanks.

Author Reply: Hi UTfrog. Sorry about that, but I don't go out of my way to plan when a particular cliffhanger shows up; they just do so naturally and it's just the luck of the draw as to which posting day they land on. At any rate, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate it.

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