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| Elf Academy 3: The Enemy Within by Fiondil | 12 Review(s) |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 58 on 7/18/2014 |
| Logistics. But they are an essential part of the story--who will do what, and how and when. I am pleased to see that some of those who have so far just been on the periphery of things are beginning to take a more active role. I'm curious to see how those patrols are going to work--lurking around the streets of a town is a somewhat different task than lurking around in trees in a forest. Fionwe, huh? And now Finlay knows him as "Finn". I get the feeling that the village is going to be a lot more important in the future than has seemed in the past. Though I hope we get to know Ed and Sakari a little more before they leave. Author Reply: Hi Dreamflower. Yes, what would we do without logistics? I am trying to get some of the peripheral characters to be more active or at least be able to shine once in a while. I hope to do it more so in Elf Academy 4. I think you're right about the Inuit village being important. Finlay and Sakari will be sticking around for a bit, so we'll see more of them before they go back. Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it. | |
| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 58 on 7/18/2014 |
| So Finn administered the sleep. Interesting. I like that Ed is willing to return as he promised, even though he wants to stay informed. Looks like he will be an ally. Thanks for the chapter. Author Reply: Ed is a cool guy and he will definitely be an ally, as we will see. Thanks for reviewing, UTfrog. It's appreciated. | |