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| Elf Academy 3: The Enemy Within by Fiondil | 12 Review(s) |
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| rikki | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 2/28/2014 |
| Aha! Perhaps the three amigos will push the problem that the elves are having dealing with mortals and who gets to run the show. Rather subtle about it, but it stood out to me what Finda was doing and seeing Alex and Derek pick up on it gives me hope that things will work out. Alex and Derek are right though, they are not babysitters but at least now they are aware of things going on and the Wiseman Intelligence Agency is not going to be out of the picture when this whole thing boils over. Because until the elves confront each other, they are not going to work out their differences, but they also don't need to alienate the mortals and that is where I hope Alex and Derek will come in handy. Author Reply: Hi rikki. You're right on the button with this and we'll see in the next chapter and in subsequent chapters how Alex and Derek handle the situation and how the Elves handle the situation and how everything works out or doesn't. Alex and Derek are the key to some extent, though other Mortals will also play pivotal roles in what happens next. Thanks for commenting. It's very much appreciated. | |
| Laer | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 2/28/2014 |
| sounds like a lot of assumptions are getting made. (Maybe the assumption is being made by me) They should just "spell it out" to each other before it becomes deeper rift :( Author Reply: Hi Laer. Yeah, there are a lot of assumptions being made, but the Three Amigos are really not savvy enough to just spell it out. Not that they really need to. Alex and Derek aren't dummies and they seem to realize what's going on. We'll see how they deal with the information they've gotten from the three Ellyn soon enough. Thanks for reviewing. It's appreciated. | |