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Elf Academy 3: The Enemy Within  by Fiondil 13 Review(s)
Clouded LeopardReviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/7/2014
Hi Fiondil,

Finally got home to read the current chapter. Couldn't read it this morning due to server issues. I am getting a kick out of all these personalities. The way each of the elves, both Valinorian and Wiseman elves are fascinated with their profiles could be seen as hilarious or even astounded depending on whose profile your looking at.

Also I have been keeping track of all the Valinorians who came to Wiseman. I am only missing one person in the group (whomever it is, LOL). Also what name does Vardamir go by?

Can't wait for Monday's chapter and how they will react to group therapy.



Author Reply: Hi Clouded Leopard. Yes, SoA didn't come back online until about 4:30 ET. Anyway, I'm glad you're getting a kick out of the personality typing and who wouldn't be fascinated by such things? The mystery Elf will be revealed in this story. I just wasn't sure who had come with Finrod and was dithering about it. Vardamir goes by Mir (pronounced "meer"). Thanks for leaving a review. It's much appreciated.

SunnyReviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/7/2014
It looks like these sessions are off to a good start, even the ones directed by Mortals. And it seems that most of the Elves are sufficiently intrigued by this that I would guess none, or at least very few, are likely to drop out.
So Fionwë is back in Wiseman, is he? I would have guessed he would still be somewhere in the Arctic, counting snowflakes, or something equally time-consuming. Or perhaps Olórin is there as his minder, in an attempt to teach him some sense?

Here, have some music that is lovely enough to make even Elves sit up and take notice:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GVTFJdl5DME

Author Reply: Hi Sunny. Yes, it does look as if theses classes are off to a good start. Whether people will stick with it or not remains to be seen. You're probably right about Olórin being Fionwë's minder. *grin* Thanks for the link. Very lovely. And thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it very much.

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/7/2014
I actually need to read this again, more than once, to give a better review. My initial response is great job. You seriously pegged some of the personalities

Author Reply: No problem, UTfrog. There's a lot in this chapter and a slow re-read is a good idea. I look forward to any further comments you may wish to impart, but I'm glad you found that I managed to seriously peg some of the personalities. Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate it.

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