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| The Quiet War by MP brennan | 11 Review(s) |
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| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/30/2013 |
| I enjoyed this very much and felt you captured the struggle of the Rangers brilliantly and how Aragorn still has much to learn but is gradually showing his true worth. I love your portrayal of Ivorwen. These Ranger women were so strong. As you asked for concrit, I find "I'm fine" rather jarringly modern.I think "I'm well enough," would work better. Otherwise, the story worked brilliantly for me. Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad this piece worked overall, especially since it's unbeta'ed. I do struggle with "modernisms" sometimes. I'd blame that on being rusty, but the same slip ups are all over my older work too. *sigh* I'm glad you enjoyed it! | |