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| False Faces by Alisha B | 38 Review(s) |
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| Elvenesse | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 9/28/2003 |
| I've just watched a program on the SAS and interrogation - so this probably wasn't the best story to read afterwards, now I'm even more freaked out. I’m sure Aragorn can take the torture; it’s the mind games he’ll have to watch out for. And now Felnorvard and Saruman are showing their true colours. | |
| Lady Wind | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/21/2003 |
| I've actually read this story before on fanfiction.net, but I saw your story on this site, so I thought I'd check it out. I love your improvements!! The conversation with Sauruman is great; it makes so much more sense to have him working hard at persuading Aragorn rather than just going straight to drugging him. I think that is a really good way to repost something, rather than just putting it all up verbatum. A few minor notes: throne was misspelt twice in the past chapter; and you may want to make it more clear that Aragorn is partially confused because of the power of Saruman's voice, not just by what he is saying. I like it though! : ) Author Reply: *cough*theyhaven'tdruggedhimyet*cough* whew, sorry, something in my throat there. :-D lol. Hey! Yes, I recognize you!! Thanks for giving this thing a second chance. I really wasn't happy with the first few chapters, and going back over them, I added about 3,000 words. I'm glad you can notice the difference. No no, we don't want Aragorn to be "thrown" anywhere, do we! lol! Thanks for pointing it out. It will be corrected when I post chapter 5! | |
| Elvenesse | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/21/2003 |
| It probably is a little AU, but that doesn’t bother me at all, since it's an interesting story. (As long as Aragorn isn't killed, because that wouldn't be an evil AU!) Oooh, naughty Saruman, kidnapping the Isildur's heir, Gandalf won't look kindly on that. I found this story on fanfiction, but I prefer reading it as you post on here, because the editing you're doing makes it read a lot better. | |
| Brenda G. | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/13/2003 |
| Well, golly gee! Where do you get off, just leaving your readers hanging like that?!? Boy, you've got my attention. I like your style of writing, the flow of action, the mystery. This "master" must want Aragorn in one piece for some reason we don't know. Makes me wonder is this mystery master is aware of Aragorn's true identity, as the heir to the throne of Gondor. Ah, well, guess we'll have to wait for you to post before we find that out. So, what are you waiting for? Post already! This is a great start to what will undoubtedly become a terrific story. Keep up the good work! Your fans await... BG | |
| Elvenesse | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/13/2003 |
| Well, since it helps you update faster, I'm definitely posting. Very good and well written and I'm not left with the urge to skim any of it. Aragorn is nicely in character. | |
| Elvenesse | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/9/2003 |
| I'm really pleased to have found a well-written and interesting story about Aragorn – they tend to be very rare. I’m intrigued, and really want to know what’s happening here. | |
| IceAngel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/8/2003 |
| Hmmm strange indeed! I'll be keeping my eye on this fic, I'm wondering what you're planning. And it's well written too, the dialogue seems very true, I'll be back later to see what happens! update soon IceAngel | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/7/2003 |
| Well, that's an exciting start. Who is this man who is with the Orcs? And how did they hear about Aragorn/Strider? Not a happy thought. | |