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| False Faces by Alisha B | 38 Review(s) |
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| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 2/14/2004 |
| hi there, loved this story, it is so good. Great fight scene, and loved the part where it is easier to heal Aragorn, when he is not awake to fight them. would love to read more from you when Aragorn finally manages to get hold of Gullom. thanks for the good read | |
| bumper | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/5/2004 |
| love the story, what a cliffie, first the elves and rangers are outnumbered, but now Aragorn is being surrounded, this does not look good. can't wait for more | |
| luinthien | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/5/2004 |
| Oh you bad bad author!! Cliffies are evil!! I can't believe that you're going to leave us hanging there. Another great chapter! I can't believe that there is only going to be one more chapter. This has been a great story. Keep up the great work. | |
| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/2/2004 |
| hi there, just wanted to say good i think this chapter is, and the whole story. You have done a good job on Elledan and Elrohir, as healers and as elves. A lot of writers have them acting like little elflings, when they are 3000 year old warriors. I also like how they interact with Aragorn. | |
| Rinn | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 1/26/2004 |
| Hmm, I see many different ways this could work out. But at least Aragorn is all fixed up now, even if he is a little tired and sore. I'm glad the twins sat him down and made him see that he was wrong about not wanting to help Gandalf. You did a very good job with that part, I think. They let him come to his own conclusions. I think that helps keep him in character better! (not that there was a problem, mind you) Ah, shoot, I have to run to class, but I just wanted to drop a review and tell you that I enjoyed this chapter! Keep up the good work! | |
| Rinn | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/21/2004 |
| Wow! I loved what you did with Aragorn's healing. It was very well written with great description. Hopefully Aragorn will be back to his normal self after this, although I'm interested to see if you write in any side effects... Also, I'm sure Felnorvard will show himself again... that should be fun. Maybe I'm getting ahead of myself. *g* Guess I'll have to wait and find out! Keep up the good work! | |
| Kathira | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/15/2004 |
| I hate to be like the repetitive, silly, chirping reviewers on ff.net, but this is really good. Please continue! I like the way you are handling the change in Aragorn's feelings and attitude, nice and subtle, such that although it's obvious to others, he doesn't realize it himself. It's good to see the twins also, especially in their role as healers. I also like the combination of medical and mental practice in healing and diagnosis. Overall, the story is very well done, suspenseful and interesting. I encourage you to continue writing generally, original fiction as well as fan fiction. You could easily be published professionally. | |
| luinthien | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/15/2004 |
| Sorry that it has been so long since I have reviewed. I have been enjoying the story very much!! You are a great writer and I can't wait until the next chapter. I see a lot of angst ahead for poor Aragorn. Thank goodness his brothers are there for him. Keep up the good work!! | |
| Rinn | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/11/2004 |
| Good story! I was wondering where Aragorn was. Did you have a specific place in mind when you wrote it? I was looking at the map, and it got me thinking. If Aragorn is in a thick forest, there is really only two if they're following the mountains, Druadan and Firien. Did Felnorvard take him all the way to the Druadan forest? Talk about being saved in the nick of time, that's REALLY close to Mordor. And, I also have to say, rescued by Faramir's rangers? I love Faramir almost as much as I love Aragorn... *G* Anyway, keep up the good work and post soon! | |
| Kathira | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/8/2004 |
| Oooh, rescued by Faramir's rangers! (Maybe?) I am really enjoying this story very much. Excellent work with both plot and characterizations. Keep up the good work and keep those chapters coming! | |