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| The Love of a Lord by WendWriter | 13 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/12/2009 |
| She does appear rather young and inexperienced, in many ways--and I mean that not as a disparagement but merely as an observation. She must come to appreciate herself ere she seek to draw another to her, I fear. Author Reply: She's a classic case of arrested development. This is a result of trauma in her childhood, which Celebrian will help her to deal with. One of the reasons she thinks the way she does is because she's still very much a child, though she is older than Elrond. I wanted to play with the idea of love from a childlike perspective, which is why I did that. If she was more mature and sophisticated, the story would have turned out very differently. Thanks for the review. :D | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/12/2009 |
| I had to read chapter one on FF.n as it appears blank in my browser here on SOA. I found when I first started posting here that I had to save my files in Rich Text Format and post that, or they wouldn't post correctly. Fiondil recently had difficulty posting due to an unfamiliar word processor or browser, I believe, and had a chapter or two he had to repost to have everyone read it. You might ask him of his experience and see what he had to do to get things posting properly. That done: A lovely chapter. Poor Losgael sounds as if she has a good deal to work through. And to have her love unrequited would be a great grief indeed. I hope Glorfindel is able to reassure her. Author Reply: Heh! You think Losgael has issues with love? Wait till you get into Glorfindel's head!! That's a ways off yet, though. Thanks for the review. :D | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/12/2009 |
| May he appreciate it indeed. She has wrought well, it would appear. Author Reply: Thanks. Losgael has a lot of talents, but she's been hiding them under a bushel. The love story gets complicated after this, but it's a great deal of fun! Thanks for your review. :D | |