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| The Valley is Jolly by Canafinwe | 81 Review(s) |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/1/2009 |
| What an intriguing beginning! Poor little Estel, so sick, and Elrond, so worried! This is a very interesting idea of what could have been going on during that long ago visit by a wizard, 13 Dwarves and a hobbit. I loved the entwining of the wood-elves songs in with Elrond's worried thoughts-- an excellent device to show the contrast between what was seen by their guests and what was going on behind closed doors. Author Reply: Thank you! I'm glad you liked my use of the song. Guests are often unaware of the undercurrents of tension in the home in which they stay; it is the mark of a good host to keep them in blissful ignorance. Of course, Elrond has other motives for secrecy, too... | |