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| It by White Wolf | 56 Review(s) |
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| sofia Baraklilis | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/6/2009 |
| well... I totally believe Legolas is still running around in those tunnels. If I were Aragorn, I would try to find the exit, so the light from it would show down into the tunnels and Legolas, if he came by, would be able to pick up on it. But then again, Aragorn is very unlikely to do that and leave Legolas behind, and even if he did, Legolas would still be searching for Aragorn. I guess the best case is that they find each other soon, so maybe Legolas should be that thing Aragorn tripped over... Can't wait for more! Author Reply: That's an interesting plan. But, knowing both of them, you are right that nether of them wouldn't leave until they found the other, no matter how long that took. If Legolas is what Aragorn tripped over, that would mean the Legolas is unconscious or dead. Either way, the snake would have gotten him rather than left him lying in a tunnel. We'll just have to see what happens. | |
| Beverly | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/5/2009 |
| Oh Great! Instead of getting closer together, they are wandering farther apart. Pretty sure Aragorn has found the torch that Legolas dropped. Hope he can get it re-lit. They both need to find a way of marking the tunnels so they don't keep going in circles. Eh -- easier said than done, I think. Can't wait to find out what Legolas does to escape the snake. Please update soon. As Always Peace Beverly Author Reply: I know that is frustrating to readers. Fortunately, L & A aren't really aware of it. We'll see if you are right about the torch. I think that is much easier said than done. Even if they did mark the tunnels, they might miss the the marks in the dark, and tey certainly don't have the time to slow down and feel for a mark. You are assuming that Legolas gets away. :o) Peace to you. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/3/2009 |
| I suspect he's just found the spent torch. And I understand the anxiety both feel! Author Reply: That's a good guess. We'll see if you are right. I can understand their anxiety, as well. | |
| LadyLegolas | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/28/2009 |
| Oh dear-Oh dear-Oh dear!! EVIL CLIFFIE!! :D I was wondering. I have a Legolas fanfiction story that I have posted on FanFiction.net. If you had the time, would you read and review? You wouldn't have to do it all at once. I would just enjoy hearing what another Leggy fan has to say about it. Thanks either way, and write more! lol Author Reply: Yes, it is rather, isn't it? I haven't had the time to read your story yet, but I will. I'll let you know what I think. :o) | |
| Beverly | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/27/2009 |
| I am loving this story White Wolf. These boys *tisk, tisk* So typical of Aragorn to want to investigate and so typical of Legolas to be cautious. And, as usual it seems, Legolas is risking his life to spare Aragorns. This snake gives me the creeps. Please, don't let us hang in suspense too long. Where is Legolas---what has happened to him? Looking forward to an up-date---SOON!! :-) As Always Peace Beverly Author Reply: I'm happy that you are. :o) That seems to be the roles those two have adopted. Too bad Legolas's caution doesn't keep them out of trouble. I think Legolas goes along so he can spare the ranger from total disaster. A giant snake in a dark underground tunnel would give anyone the creeps. By the time you read this, a new chapter will be out, so you won't have much wait time at all. | |
| Sulwing of Mirkwood | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/17/2009 |
| Sorry. I just realized that I kind of put a spoiler in that last post. Feel free to remove from sight. I hate spoilers. Bad Sulwing. >:( Add-on for "Cold Wind": Poor Aragorn. And Legolas. Add-on for "It": Poor Aragorn. And Legolas. Trouble always follows these two. Or they dig it up themselves! Author Reply: It's sad that 'poor Aragorn and Legolas' can be applied to both stories. Those two just seem to get into trouble time after time. I'd be interested to know how many times it was their fault versus how many times they just got sucked into trouble without doing a thing. :o) | |
| Sulwing of Mirkwood | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/17/2009 |
| Ai! I took you up on your suggestion, White Wolf, and read "Cold Wind." Oh. My. Goodness. I think I will be emotionally damaged for life. Very. Big. Scar. That was just so creepy, spine-chilling, bone-shuddering, sad, tragic, depressing, and--and--ooh. Suffice it to say that you wrote a very convincing story. But WHY did Arondo have to die? :( Don't really know why I attached this review thing to "It." Whatever. It's a good story too. (Lame pun sadly intended.) You really know how to write them, don't you? Author Reply: I'm glad you read the story, but I'm sorry you were so badly affected. Imagine how I felt writing it. The funny thing is that the last paragraph came to me one night, and it stayed with me until I wrote a storyt hat ended with that paragraph. That's why there was no aftermath written. I hated to kill Arondo, because I really liked him, but I needed to show just how evil Saeargar was and the lengths he would go to to keep Legolas from trying to fight back and gain control. A review is a review wherever you put it. I do try. :o) | |
| Sulwing of Mirkwood | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/9/2009 |
| Well, well. Cliffhanger! Again! That's okay. I don't mind cliffhangers as long I can read the next chapter in a reasonable amount of time. ;) Besides, think of all the speculation cliffhangers cause. Anyway, about the story. I like it alot, so I finally decided to leave a review. "It" is written very well. Naturally, as this is the WW we are talking about. Anyway good job. I like the beginning of the chapter when it crosses Aragorn's mind that Legolas would be a very dangerous enemy. (Brings back memories of the book when Tolkien insinuates that Aragorn could be a very powerful and bad Dark Lord if he took the Ring.) Uh-oh. I just had a very scary answer as to why Legolas didn't follow Aragorn. The snake hypnotized or otherwise poisoned him so now we can see the elf as a bad guy. Just kidding. I hope. One last thing. I have always liked the idea of Legolas constantly sacrificing himself for Aragorn (somewhat frustrating that hero.) To my mind, Legolas does this for two reasons. One, he knows just how important Estel is to the world. And two, Aragorn is his best friend, and vice versa. Which explains why our ranger gets frustrated with the elf. He would like a chance at sacrificing himself for his friend! For once, please! ;) Okay, I will now be concluding this very long and perhaps slightly random review. Hope it makes you feel :) White Wolf! Keep writing! Author Reply: I feel the same way about cliffies. I really hate them, though, when one is left and the story is abandoned, which has happened to me many times. I'll never abandon a story if I'm in any way able to complete it. And yes, they do tend to bring readers back. :o) I'm glad you like the story and took the time to leave a review for it. Thank you for the complement. It's always nice when anyone sees my name on a story and knows they'll have a good read. I think Aragorn would have reviled even Melkor in his power as a Dark Lord. That would truly have been scary for Middle-earth. As for Legolas, you might try my story "Cold Wind". You will find out what is keeping Legolas in the next chapter. I totally agree with you on the reasons Legolas is always willing to sacrifice for Aragorn. Either reason alone would prompt him to do it, you can be sure. I think Aragorn does sacrifice, but often in more subtle ways. I enjyed your review, and I will definitely keep writing. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/5/2009 |
| Ah--quite the predicamate! Now, to find out what Legolas is doing while Aragorn is getting lost! Author Reply: I'm assuming you meant predicament. And yes, it most certainly is. I'm pretty sure you'll find out what's happening with Legolas in the next chapter. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/5/2009 |
| Okay--someone apparently trapped a dragon or something similar down here, and these two not-so-innocents just walked down into its bedroom! And this one doesn't sound like the last one they encountered! Author Reply: I love the way you summed that up, especially the bedroom part. If you are referring to Treco, this one isn't a dragon. You'll soon find out what it is. | |