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| In Deep Water by Grey Wonderer | 11 Review(s) |
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| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/29/2008 |
| (Frodo) Harrowcatliz patted (Merimas) GW on the back and said, “That was very impressive, (Merimas)GW.” You know that bit in your prologue about other people helping to improve your writing? Offered very humbly..... that he could extent to Merimas ....(extend) “Your chicken.” ....(you're) He’d nearly drown(ed) only two days ago “Well, what if you were sitting here by the pond like Frodo was the other day when you nearly drown(ed)?” Merimas said. Pippin objected not wanting to think that he could have actually drown(ed). Author Reply: All corrected. Thanks. I must have messed up some of my dear beta's corrections while transferring the story over. I was trying to fix a problem with the italics which never worked and I may have transferred a few of my original mistakes in doing so. You just gotta love format issues! | |