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| Aspects of Aragorn by Inzilbeth | 428 Review(s) |
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| Lady_Roisin | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/4/2008 |
| You've done a really great job. Your descriptions and dialogue were both very good. I could actually picture Aragorn as a child being so enthralled by a young foal. I could vry easily imagine it was very hard for Gilraen to leave her home. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more chapters. :-) Author Reply: Thank you very much for your review and your kind words. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I wanted to include a brief glimpse of Aragorn's life before everything changed and I felt he would be completely fascinated by a new foal. I hope you enjoy the next chapter! | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/3/2008 |
| The characterization of Gilraen is really well done here. We know so little about her, but you've extrapolated nicely from what we do know about the Dunedain. I can see her fitting into that culture as a young but fully adult woman who's grieving but acting wisely in her concern for her child. And Elrond's family treats her with the respect she deserves, not just for who she is but for the kind of person she is. Author Reply: Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. I think you have summarized Gilraen's situation perfectly here. It's such a shame we are told so little about the Dunedain as, by the end of the Third Age, they have become such a paradox. On the one hand, they are have all that sophisticated Numenorean culture behind them and yet, by the time we first meet Aragorn, they have become these despised nomads. Quite how Gilraen fits into all that is very difficult to say. | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/2/2008 |
| I'm delighted to see this excellent story being posted here. I love your Gilraen. I only hope young Aragorn gets horses at Rivendell too. Author Reply: Well I'm absolutely delighted to have you as a reader and thank you so much for all your encouraging comments. I'm sure there will be no shortage of horses for Aragorn to ride in Rivendell. At least I certainly hope not! | |
| Estelcontar | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/2/2008 |
| I'm so glad you've started posting these vignettes here. As I told you once, I liked Hope very, very much. I think it's a very thoughful and poignant tale, in which you've managed to give us a very perceptive glimpse of what Gilraen must have felt when she was suddenly confronted by the loss of Arathorn, and by the need to protect Aragorn. Her grief, and her strenght felt very real, as did her love for Aragorn. Author Reply: Hi Estelcontar, I'm glad you enjoyed this. And I so appreciate all your support and encouragement. I'm sure anyone who has ever lost someone can identify very easily with Gilraen and to have her life turned up side down as well, had to have been terribly difficult for her. I certainly see her as a strong woman who made huge sacrifices for her child. | |
| Elflingimp | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/2/2008 |
| That was very well written and I enjoyed it immensly(I know I didn't spell that right) I have never read your stories before, have you written anything else? I loved this and will wait for more! Hugs The Imp Author Reply: Hello Imp! Hugs back! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this chapter. This story is my only complete one to date. I've been sitting on most of it for years but now I'm finally posting here, I'll put up a chapter a week. Thank you for the kind review. | |
| Cairistiona | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/2/2008 |
| I'm so glad to see you posting your stories here at last! It was fun to beta for you, but seeing the finished story posted is such a treat. This chapter is lovely on so many levels, but I have to say the interactions between the twins and Aragorn are my favorite moments. When they take him between them to go look at the horses at Imladris, my heart just melted. "Little Rider" is such a fitting endearment from Elrohir. The picture of the two mighty Elven warriors carrying on so over a small child is sweet. And Gilraen's sorrow and bravery come through very well. It is amazing the strength that can be found in motherhood, in knowing that the life of a little one lies solely (or nearly that) in your hands. I've told you before, but very nicely done! Author Reply: Well thanks to your pushing and prodding, I got here in the end! I like to think that coming to Rivendell was a fairly easy transistion for Aragorn. He was only a toddler and can hardly have known his father so I don't think he would have found it too much of an ordeal. And yes, I love the idea that Elrond's sons took to him immediately. Thank you so much for the beta and I'm glad you enjoyed it. | |
| Lissas Elves | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/2/2008 |
| Inzilbeth, how lovely to see you begin to post your story! I really love your take on Gilraen in this chapter; she's so real, acts so convincingly - great job. :-) Lissa Author Reply: Hi Lissa, thank you so much. It's easy to forget sometimes just how young Gilraen was at this time so I'm glad you liked my version of her. | |
| Estel Greenleaf | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/2/2008 |
| A very good gapfiller. Very sweet, and touching. -E.G. Author Reply: Thank you so much. | |