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Happily Ever After  by Nilmandra 16 Review(s)
Mum's the WordReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/16/2008
Nilmandra, I can't even begin to verbalize how wonderful and moving this story is! It flows so well with your "History Lessons" and other stories. All I can say is, you're tearing me poor heart out!

Wonderful, keep it up, beautiful, suspenseful!

Big, big hugs,
Mum

Author Reply: Oh, I'm glad. There is such joy in telling a real story like this. The HL series were so different in construction and writing. This is quite fun (unless you're half elven)...

GwynhyffarReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/16/2008
... Nilmandra

... I swear

... if put Elrohir through everything you have put him through and then finally got him to Valinor only to kill him off, I am NOT going to be happy!

Oh, and is it my imagination or did Irmo call Elrond a tool?

Author Reply: LOLOL, well you see, neither Irmo nor I knew 'tool' was slang for something bad! Tools are good things - and a good tool can be used to accomplish good things. That is all Irmo meant, that he guided Elrond in guiding others. :D

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/16/2008
*Whimper*

What's wrong with Elrohir? I still can't work it out. I think part of him blames himself for dragging Elladan along - yet Elladan seems to be thriving from all the new experiences. Perhaps that's it - Elladan is flourishing away from his twin, while Elrohir misses him.

This is a wonderfully crafted tale, because I just can't see where it's going!


Jay


Author Reply: LOL,that pleases me, Jay! I like this power of POV, for we are limited in this case to the perspective of Elrond and Celeborn, and feel their frustration (I hope). :D

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/16/2008
Well I guess I'm not as clever as some people around here(LOL) I still haven't figured out what is going on with Elrohir,but it is a beautiful story, I loved it when Elladan turned into a bird and flew with Elwing and also all the descriptions about the Vingilot and the stardust. Hope things get better soon, will be waiting Deb

Author Reply: I so wanted to be Elladan! There has to be soon privilege to being Peredhil, when so much has been asked of them and they have lived so long with dual natures.

I am glad I have held you in suspense. :>)

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/16/2008
I loved the idea of Elladan flying. I can see how that would really appeal to him, and besides, it's in his blood.

It must about kill Elrond to watch Elrohis fade and be able to do nothing.

Author Reply: Elrond is learning much about powerlessness, and soon, misconceptions. :D

CesReviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/16/2008
I'm as confused as Elrond. I'm hoping Elrohir accepts help soon or it will be too late.

And can Elladan do anything?

The mystery deepens. I feel so sorry for everyone. Don't leave us in suspense too long!

Ces

Author Reply: The suspense will soon end, I promise. :)

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