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| Happily Ever After by Nilmandra | 12 Review(s) |
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| Ces | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/14/2008 |
| Poor Elrohir. Poor Elladan and poor Elrond. They are all suffering and I'm confused as to what is going on with Elrohir! I hope he finds what he needs to heal. Glad to see Elladan seems to be recovering nicely. I think he needs a little time away. You have created a great story and I'm enjoying it. Ces Author Reply: I am enjoying the writing of this, though I do feel bad for Elrond! And for the twins, poor peredhil. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/14/2008 |
| Poor Elrond. There's nothing worse than seeing one's children suffer, wanting to help, and being rebuffed. No wonder he's frustrated. I'm glad to see that Elladan is having a good time anyway. This reads very fast. The prose and storytelling are slickly done. Author Reply: I do feel bad for Elrond. As we've discussed, this is the power of POV, too, as the story is more compellingly told from his perspective. This has been good to write. :D | |